Wednesday 15 February 2017

Daring Part 27



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Daring Love Story

Part 27

Geetangli's meeting with Maanveer's other wife also not so pleasant, well it is never be pleasant because old wife's, never like another one but Geetangli took it positively and understand their stand and pain too. She too had desired for someone, who would be just her own but she sighed because those dreams haven't left with any meaning now because she is married to Maanveer who lost the count of women in his Palace.

She could feel the grandeur in her welcome but the warm feeling of love is missing and she understood, they are following traditions robotically; there is no love in their gesture or welcome. All has been retired to their personal chambers or palace. Just few queen of Maanveer along with elders left to escort Geetangli to the Maanveer's chamber for their first night.

She took off her veil off for some times to check out around the magnificent chamber of Maanveer, it should be lie if she said that his chamber doesn't make her spellbound with beauty of architecture, she was not well aware about this unique designs but she understood that its a mixture of Indian and Some other country arts. This fact doesn't surprised her as she knew somewhere.. Maanveer loves to travel around and he is like a giant source of knowledge and this is the only quality which she admired in her Husband.

She stroll toward the open personal area of his chamber and the arrangements to rest here was also just Perfect like the other sections in his chamber but this part attract het with pleasant view of mountain and waterfall. His workers have decorated this area to with some alien flowers as she had never seen those before. There is no doubt if Rajbhumi her native place was a pond than Tilak-ghad is like a ocean..."Ocean of Salt water".

she made a face when she remembered her first meeting with his family. She was all lost in the moon and the shine around it... there was a red circle around the moon and she knew... this is the indication of rain. She sighed when she felt the burning session in her beautiful doe eye. Rain was used to be the best time and she loves to dance into the rain with Lalita like a carefree toddler but now life has been changed... scenario has been changed... Maanveer doesn't entrain childishness... He has lots of expectation from her and this is... what suffocates her.

"She loves her people and he loves to rule his people"

This valley of thoughts is never going to be fill

She doesn't know when she slept on the swing under moon light... until she found herself carried by Her beast back into bedroom.

Maanveer chuckled to see her lost confused expression and then she started to struggle but he didn't paid much attention to newly wedded queen who looks angry... he couldn't make out if her face is red cause of anger or her shyness but he loves to play with her... he started to like their arguments and bantering. Its something new when someone had guts to see into his eyes and say no to him despite she is completely depends on him.

He placed her on the their bed between flowers... this is his favourite flowers known as "Tulipain". One day a traveler had visited his court to know about the "Indian Spices" and gifted him the seeds of beautiful "Tulipain" flowers.

"App hume aise..." the little bit shuttering in his queen voice made him chuckled but his devil side was not in the mood of some misery.

"Kuch adhoori baatien aaj puri karni hai Geetangli... Aaj poran hone ki raat hai" an evil smirk adored his devil deep orbs.

Geetangli shivered with his deep sensual words... She is young innocent girl who is still alien about relationship between a man and women and the circumstances of her marriage...didn't allowed her to pondering on this aspect of marriage.

She gulped when Maanveer bend toward her... he looks giant to her and his aura is naturally dominating.

"Humm..!!!"

"Haa... hum... ??? Kya Geetangli??" He asked as his started to unbutton first 2 buttons of his Indian choker neck style coat...

"Chaliye ... app kuch matt kahiye... Hum hii aaj kuch adhoore karye pure kar lete hai..." with that he took out something from his back..."A beautifully blossomed Nilkamal".

Geetangli was taken aback when she found herself trapped in her own plan...

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She couldn't help but remembered when he asked her go with him to the nearby village to the kaali temple and local traditional Trade fair but she denied and  when he forced she asked a riddle and challenged him.

"Maharaj!!! Some soldiers wants to go to see the fair in nearby village if you give permission.. There is one ancient Maa kali temple too.. if you feel right then you should also pay a visit there and Fair is also one of lavished market of Minakari jeweler" Aditya said when Maanveer finished his practice and wiping his sweaty body with silk cloth.

"It's not going to cake walk for you and if you are thinking than you could scared me with your huge structure than get that straight, I also had the blood of warriors in my vein Maharaj !!! So better leave me.." Geetangli spoke whatever comes over her tongue but Maanveer smiled instead of getting angry or damn this girl is thinking that I am scaring her with my huge structure.. ohh Maanveer her innocence is a killer.. he thought and his smile infected to see the little queen struggle to come out from his grip.

"Only your yes going to be key word of the cost of your independence.. Rani" he is playing with her features and curves and making her urge to get free from his clutch.

"You need to hard work before getting my forgiveness Maharaj.."

"Hard work.. forgivness? ? really... do you really expect this?" his expressions mocked her "well!! what was that?"

"There is a riddle and you have to solve it without your ministers helps.."

"Ohh really.. well I love challenges Rani.. perhaps I liked you to so much.." Maan laughed but his face held those egoistic expressions still.

"Naa lage vo shuate naa payee usse kala..
 Naa hu dharti per akash se bhi vo nirala..
 Apvitrata mai jo naa khoye pavitrata..
 Komal hai uske ang or mukh ki chata damkta pila..
 Bhala bhuju tu naam iska!!!!!

It's neither white or black,
 It's neither found on earth or sky,
 It's found at the sinful place but still maintain sacredness..
 It's body soft and mouth is bright yellow...
 Tell me the name of this object king !!!!"


Geetangli finished her riddle with the smirk on her face."

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She asked the riddle from him and she celebrate his defeat when He didn't answered her... now she was in the mood to deny his advances in the pretext to be angry on him but he has defeated her whole plan to stay as untouched.


"Apko apka uttar tu mil hii gaya hai rani tu abb hume humara Adhikaar bhi de hii dijiye"  and Geetangli gasped when he was just an inch away from her. She stopped breathing in fear.

Maanveer and explanation can never go with other and same happened when he scooped his queen into his arms once again and he took her out, she surprised to see complete silence around her... there is no guard around the chamber. She once looked into Maanveer eye but his firmed expression didn't entertain her queries much. She just wriggled little bit but stopped when they are on stairs... she doesn't want a broken leg or a bleeding forehead once again.. she had enough injuries from their trip.

Maanveer chuckled like he understood her so well and his this action got immediate action from his queen... who sniffed her nose in anger.

"Where are you taking me..?" She scanned around her, worried with his intention specially when he placed her on his horse and then join her on same horse before they left the peripheries of his place and reached the outskirts of tilak-ghad and soon entered into the woods.

She was right... scary cloud has announced their domains over moon and Tilak ghad drowned into the darkness... Thunderstorm is like a mirror image of her own heart but Maanveer didn't bother about it and keep running his horse in speed. She skipped a heartbeat when his horse hit a stone but Maanveer is train rider and took back charge in his hand ... and both again move ahead with same storming speed.

"Please be careful Rana jii..!!" She mumbled with closed eye.

Maanveer slow down little bit and questioned her new habit to call him as Rana instead of Maharaj.

"Rani...!! When I promoted as Rana from Maharaj"

His teasing tone always rubbed wrong side of his young queen but right now she is holding on his arms for her dear life and decided to be quite instead of taking part in his teasing and answer him.

"I am waiting Rani.." but he was not something which can digest ignorance that to from his newly found queen.

"Apki sab patniya apko Rana jii hi bulati hai tu bas hum bhi.."

He chuckled with her childish reason but she is adorable.

They are now reached and Maanveer jump down from his horse while other side Geetangli is finding it difficult to get down due to her heavy embroidery Dress and jewelry.  Maanveer waited for her to ask help but he shook his head disappointed.

His queen is stubborn just way too much stubborn to ask his help. He pull her down in one swift motion and heard her loud shriek.

He smirked to see her claws all out in the mood to attack...

"Ye krodh bacha ke rakhiye Rani... aaj raat ko kaam aaye gaa..." with this stance.. he started to climb temple stairs with Geetangli in his arms.

Geetangli just give a helpless look to the temple in front of them, she couldn't oppose his action every time when her family is living under his wings. She understood that he is just fulfilling his wish to visit this ancient temple with her after answering her riddle as per her condition. He is like enigma... no no not enigma but unpredictable... No one can define his next action and this quality made him an unconquerable.  

Precap - A glimpse of Tilak ghad Palace Life

Words - 1700

46 comments:

  1. Nice update dear Geetika lead to Manveer room she look the room and impress by its architectural and the flowers and she slept Manveer came and gives lotus to Geetika as a answer to her pulzell and takes her to the temple as he promised to her

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  2. It was great part. Geet could feel how robotically all were performing all rituals. She understands how all are feeling but no one was there to understands her.geet was upset seeing the season as she used to enjoy in rain but now she can't do such things as her husband doesn't like his queens behave like a kid. So finally maan solved her riddle. Now geet was scared as now she has nothing to stop him. Maan was amused seeing her reaction. He was enjoying her condition. Maan took her to temple as they had planned. Now I wondering how will geet cope up with this arrogant maan. Waiting for next dear.

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  3. Though he is rude & arrogant but i hope he won't go ahead with their relation without her consent & well, geet being a princess should have been taught about all the things that happened b/w a man & a woman after their marriage. She not knowing about all this sounds weird to me.
    Please update this one soon as i'm very much interested to see how their relation will progress from the hate one to love.

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  4. BIG THANKS FOR THE UPDATE DEAR :)
    Lovely update ...Geet is really sweet and being maans wife now she can understand what other wives were going through and came to know that they are not happy with their life and robotically performing their duties as his wives...geet got amazed seeing maans room and she understood maan is very fascinated with other countries culture and architecture style that has been implemented in his room ...poor geet wanted to play in rain but she controlled knowing that everything is changed in her life and she cant do what she wished to...maan is really an enigma and he has his own style to do things and how easily he solved his wife's riddle and made sure to take her to kali maa temple before stepping into new phase of their life....maan was enjoying each moment with his stubborn wife and wanted to make her his...
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  5. Great update geetanjali knew her life now not easy she meet with his other wives ohh I so hate to think maan maary many women here she reached in maan chamber she mesmerizing by beauty
    Maan came and their talk maan did he found the answer ??? What is the answer tell us too where he taking her
    I felt that maan admired her but his ego didn't stop for evil side , here geet don't know about men women relationship her inocent and intelligence both rare combo

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  6. thank u so much for pm di..thank u ..lovely and wonderful update di.first sry i didnt read ur previous parts..i read this part really superb.this story based on ancient day.maan is king and he have more wife and love rule.people.geet is new queen of maan.she is innocent,did not know anything about husband and wife relation.geet meet maan other wife..she understand their pain.geet enter maan room.she know about maan other side.he love collect architecture.maan want go kali temple with geet but she put condition to solve riddle..she is happy he defeated but poor soul he solved her puzzles.maan scooping geet in his arms..ride to temple..she scared insake of his riding.she call him ranaji instaead of maharaj.geet so cute..maan reached kali temple.he bring down but geet cant because of her dress and jewellery.maan pickup geet in arm step into stair of temple.wow so lovely..i guessed any wrong iam sry..thank for pm and continue soon di..
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  7. Nice update
    Geetika impressed with his chamber
    She slept in moonlight, he carried her to bed
    He solved riddle ,he took her to temple

    Happydays30 (lf)

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  8. I'm sure she used to live happily in her kingdom..but since the time she got married to maanveer ..she is just angry all the time..and then royal but heartless welcome in the palace wasn't pleasant as well.

    but I love their chemistry.. he find geet very challenging.. and that she is definitely.. always trying to oppose him..

    loved it

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  9. awsemm updatee geet reluctant and understand al's problems maan enjoying geet misery

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  10. Lovely update love to see strong Geet waiting for next update

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  11. Maan knows it but he is too egoistic to let the control shift
    Geet is a change in his boring life
    she is fire n he is d wind a deadly combination

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  12. Lovely update, poor geet she got a handsome and brave husband, but he couldnot be only hers. Totally do 2 different characters and I wonder how she will be in love with will maan change for her or would be the maharaj only

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  13. wow awesome update diii
    Maanveer ne riddle sulja lia n according to riddle mandir v leke aaya geet ko...waiting for more updates...

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  14. Awesome update thanks for updating👍

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  15. First congratulations for the new blog Mohi

    Awesome update


    hmm maan - geet equation bugging me since the time i have read...
    dont know what store for them in future ?? ..

    lol Geet dislike yet admiration for MAAN and maan uff he loves to play with
    her and he started to like her stubborn coragious attitude ...
    and ohh i just love Maaneet banters ...

    Feeling so bad for geet she can understand what other wives were going through but no one was there to understands her ...
    She feels so shattered and lost, Hmm When we feel wretched
    and gloomy inside, nothing can lift up our spirit at least not until we are not willing to let our spirit high
    and the harshness life is throwing at her anyone else in her place wouldn't ...

    you know like geet i always find maan complicated confusing and he is really
    an enigma but at the same time i love him bcoz The beauty of this story
    lies in not knowing his pov clearly ........
    With every updates you leaves us guessing his motives, his attitude
    and thats what makes him more interesting ....


    aww he solved geet's riddle now she found herself trapped in her own plan...
    lets see what stor for them ...

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  16. first thing i did after coming from office reading DL :D ...
    thanks for the update and pm Mohi <3 .....
    update sooonnn

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  17. Very beautiful update. Geet is no less than Maan in stubbornness and waiting to see how the love blossoms. My IF id is Cherukuri9

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  18. Plz add me in your blog link my ff of is neel11 and blog ID is neel11blog plzz

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  19. Fantastic update
    geet got to know that maan's wives are doing everything robotically
    maan solved his wife's riddle
    he took her to temple

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  20. Super update after so much time...
    enjoyed it
    geetanjli is best.
    Loved the way you described The place and its decorations...

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  21. Awesome update...
    Loved it Beautifully written...
    & thanks for the pm
    my if id is yashika.angel

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  22. hi thanks 4 da pm n fab update! well written! Geet understands hw the other wives feel! she feels lonely! she is impressed by his room! Maan is mysterious! he takes Geet to the temple as promised! update soon! khwaishfan

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  23. thanks di for this update and link :)
    i am so happy to read it..... just love this historical genre fiction....
    i love this geetanjali, she is beauty with brain...
    loved maaneet romance... waitng for more lovey-dovey moments..

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  24. First of all thankyou soo much for PM..you write amazing...A perfect Royal touch you'd gave the way Geetanjli is talking "Ranaji...then when she said "Apki sab patniya apko Rana jii hi bulati hai tu bas hum bhi."
    and maan laughed was such a sweet gesture...Love to see Maan aa angry young King - A strict king and at the same time a soft side of husband"..
    thanks dear for update :)

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  25. superb update .. geetanjali liked the chambers and manveer stated enjoying their talks ... he solved the riddle and brought her to temple ( my id fantesy )

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  26. interesting update
    reading this story after so many days
    geet wanted to marry for love
    but she had to compromise for her family
    now she is stuck in maans palace
    geet was admiring the grandure of maans chamber
    maan is so egoistic
    bu looks like geet is no less
    eager to know what will happen next
    continue soon
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  27. a fabulous story ...
    i reallly love reading historical stories nd this my fav historical fiction...
    i hv commented upto prt 26 on ur previous blog ..
    now coming to this update i found it very interesting ..
    the way u describe every detail their royally attitudes nd ethics makes the story more interesting to read ...
    geet not felt bad seeing other ranis cold behaviour as it is obvious no woman acccept any other lady in her husband's life BT nothing can b done now..
    she always dreamed that she a person who loved with all his heart bt her expectations didnt fufill ..bt in future it will surely ..
    geet address maan as ranaji which is definitely a surprise for maan..
    nd he also solved his given riddle which left geet shocked ..
    geet felt so shy nd nervous with maan being so close to her .hehehe..
    well how can maan left a chance to tease his daring rani..
    he took her to temple nd now i m wondering what will happen nxt ..
    waiting eagerly...

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  28. oh I was very confused why and where he is taking her at night on the horse.... he took her to that ancient temple to fulfill her condition after he answered her riddle....

    Geet didn't get a chance to see any dreams for her marriage....she is sad....she knows that other Ranis of Maanveer doesn't like her as she is one more woman added into the bunch.....she understands their insecurities and jealousy....because she is also sailing on same boat.....every girl has a dream that his man will be hers only but here Maanveer palace is full of his wives...

    very interesting....

    waiting for next part....

    thanx for pm....

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  29. Part 27 – she was sent into his room. She was waiting for him. She amazed seeing the grandeur of the palace. She slept on swing looking at moon. He carried her inside then only she was awake. He answered her riddle by showing her neelkamal. She was stunned that he answered her riddle and now she has to do as he say. Seems he took her to kali ma’s mandir. So he will claim his right. What will she do now.?

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  30. First story for replying u so late litteely after reading it 2nd day..
    Simply love itt ❤
    N welcome back..
    Geet missing her place.
    N she know his ranis not like her n she well knw abt it n have no problem
    Geet was sent to maan room n undoubtedly she loved all decore..n somewhere night scare her yo when maan carried her to bed n seeing her scared she tease her.n her expression n gussa which he love to muchh n show her neelkamal n Geet was stunned to see it as he solve her puzzle n he take her to temple n she know scared more looking at maan

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  31. after long update,Geet is so stubborn and afraid of Maanveer.i like u show various actions through ur writings and riddle too

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  32. hi ,this is Sai92 From indiaforums.thanks for sending me link for this update

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  33. Lovely part..
    Geet maan ka wives ki nature and act samjha rahi hai kisi vi ladki ka liya asan nahi hai apne hubby ko kisi aur ka saath share karna.. Other queen ki jaisa uska vi kuch dreams tha apne hubby ko lekar jo kanhi puri nahi hoga.. Geet surprised and impress hai maan ka room decor dekha kar sab kuch grand royal and unique hai maanveer ka tast bahut hi acha hai.. Geetanjali ko pata hai ab uska carefree life and wish puri nahi hogi toh uska saath sa adjust kar rahi hai and maanveer na geetanjali ki riddles solve kar dia hai aur jo adhura kam reh gaya tha wo pura karna gaya kali maa temple ma darshan karna.. Maanveer geetanjali ko tease karna ka chance hi nahi chodta;) unha toh kuch vi nahi pata hai..
    Waiting for next part..
    Thanks for pm..

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  34. Hi....thanks for continuing
    I am really a big fan of ur writing
    I love ur all stories
    Now come to the update
    It's fantastic
    Maan solve the puzzel...
    Geet is really
    dating
    I loved their tashan...will wait for next chapter

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  35. loved the update...
    geet meets maans wives...
    the room decor impresses her so much...
    finally maan solved geets riddle...waiting for next part...

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  36. Lovely and cute update!!!Geet is so sweet...understable too...seeing his other Ranis gestures in grandour she understand their inner pain....Geet mesmerised to seeing Maan's chamber....she loves all decors...Maan solved her riddle and take her to the Kali temple....Loved it so much...waiting for the next update....Sorry for the late comment dear.....Thanks for the PM dear...

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  37. amazing update.... geet felt out of place in maans palace... there is no one with her and she scarificed her life for her family and people... maan solved her riddle by presenting her a lotus... he took her to temple as promised...eagerly waiting for next...

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  38. Awesome love it loved the way both reacting to each other

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  39. awessome dear :)
    samurai is very evil...

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  40. WOW!! beautiful update dear....loved it

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  41. Mindblowing update dear.....
    Totally enjoyed Maaneet moments.....
    Loved it....

    If name ... Karamjeet

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