Thursday 16 March 2017

Project- You are my Habit (Aadat Hai Tu Meri)- Part 7



You are my Habit 
(Aadat Hai Tu Meri)


@Kiran Di- Yes, I made few changes and correct all spelling mistake and most important, I removed all the Hindi Dialogues from the story, but you tell me which one was better, this one or previous version.



CHAPTER 7


A month passed his group is used to visit the apartment in his presence for group studies and Geet quietly left on the balcony for some hours as she still didn't feel good around his high headed friends excluding Adi.



"Now, What is this?" Maan asked and clenched his jaw tight.



"It's almond milk... why?? Doesn't look like one?"Geet peeps inside the glass and looked at Maan again in confusion



Maan rolled his eyes and crushed himself to even think of arguing with her... 
"Oh I am so obliged Geet that you informed me something so obvious, but please just for my general knowledge, can you tell me, why you keep it here?" Maan pointed toward his study table.



This time Geet slapped her forehead and murmured something another side Maan felt like pull his hair out first she doesn't understand his sarcasm and now she is busy in self-talking, but ignoring her antics he tapped her shoulder with questioning gaze.


"See Krishna! He doesn't know anything, offoo!! almond milk is so good for Kids, especially who had exams on their head" Geet told him very interestingly... Maan was like "please god save me from her".








"Kid???" He spoke between of his gritted teeth.


Geet bite her tongue slightly then nodded in yes then no... again yes.. whilst Maan was taking steady steps toward her and pressed her between his body and bedroom back wall.


"So, you think me as a toddler... didn't you?" Maan hissed in an inaudible voice.



Geet was so nervous to register his words in the proximity of his male body whilst Maan was unknown to their proximity and pressed himself more into her dedicated frame and don't know why but tears beamed in Geet eyes? The vulnerability of her female heart made her pushed Maan from her and run into the washroom.


Oblivious to all this Maan just laughed aloud behind her back and shouted "Omg, I never knew that a witch could also get scared, just look at your face Geet, it turns white... Ohh my god" he laughed and laughed.. unknown to the condition of Geet, whose tears dropping with his every stroke of laughing.



She cried till the time she feels calm and composed because it's hard to see yourself useless in your partner eyes and this is what Geet's ears feel due to his laugh "you are always just a laughing stroke for him... Geet" She quietly wiped her face and changed into the nightie and get ready for bed.



She saw him many times laughing over her questions, sometimes it's for her lack of knowledge, but she every time veiled her hurt very well and to get rid of those incidents with a small smile.. he didn't has any idea about her hurt because of his immature behavior.



Maan gulped down the milk later and don't give much attention to Geet.. who just comes out from the washroom and laid on their bad as he had his own projects and commitments and he had too prepared for upcoming semester too.


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One more month passed and Maan still in the role of carefree bachelor boy... whose life start from institute and end at some party or club.



One day Maan was not returned back from institute but his friend Armaan and Rahul paid a visit to his apartment as their plan of one more group study. This is never a question for them if Maan is at home or they could come here anytime and neighbors too gave them key without any inquiry but now situation is different... Geet is always in the home.


Geet smiled as bell finally ringed and she wiped her palms with apron and move to open the door for Maan.


But she surprised to see Armaan n Rahul at the door instead of Maan. She felt uneasy to let them allow inside in the absence of Maan but her straight denial can hurt them and She is still standing in their way and fiddling with the corner of Her scarf to think a way to tell them about her fear.



"He isn't at home" she tried to sound normal as much as she could.



"okay, now move please he is on the way" Rahul gave her a look of whatever.



"No.. I mean... means.. vo... I am all alone"







Her words rubbed Armaan's self-respect, next moment he pulls Rahul with him and left the building, leaving Geet behind bewailed with their sudden change of action.



Geet closed the door and sat on the couch, all fearing for Maan reaction for this incident. Her girly instinct didn't allow her to let two men enter in her apartment when she is alone but they are the old friends of Maan too which made her guilty for her action.




After half an hour Maan entered unknown the tension between his friends and wife.



"Lunch is ready Maan," she said meekly, Maan stopped for a second after hearing her dull voice but shrugged it as his over thinking only.



"Hmm... Armaan and Rahul were going to visit home, but Don't know where they are?" Maan asked casually and Geet stumbled on her place... But before she could utter a word, Door opened with a bang to their apartment.





"Nisha? ?" Maan asked surprise.


"Yes. Mr. Kurana!!! Nisha... who was your friend until today morning... remember? ?" She snapped.



"Have you turned mad or did you bang your head somewhere?" Maan said and didn't pay her any more attention to think, this is her usual drama to gain his attention like always.





"I don't believe it.. how could be you so cool after... what your wife did?" Maan turned with confused.


"Mean??"



"Ask from your so called wife.. how she insulated Armaan n Rahul? And yes... this friendship over Maan... we couldn't bear her anymore" Nisha left with the same speed and Maan turned angrily toward Geet.


"Geet.. spit out" he frustrated... "Tell me what happened?".





" Armaan and Rahul were here, but you weren't at home and I was all alone then how could I allow them inside. I mean... I" she stammered hard and eyes sting.




"Today, You have hurt me a lot" he left the room angrily and Geet had fallen down on her knees... crying her eyes out.. she doesn't want all this drama but how could she play her safety.. no... her head is bursting out with shame, anger n guilty... all mixed feelings hovered on her.



The evening turned into the dark night, but Maan didn't come back and Geet is still sitting in the same posture as cuddle as a ball.


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Maan left straight to meet Armaan and Rahul to the Nisha's apartment as he knew his gang second favorite place is Nisha's apartment only.



He somehow sorted out with his friends and come back at late night only but didn't eat anything or talked with Geet at all.



Three days passed like this only, but no conversation took place between them and he stopped eating at home too but in all this, he didn't see the condition of Geet. She turned silent completely, already she had no one here as her own and now Maan too turned his back to her... no one is here to even ask just for formality if she ate or not or if she needs anything or even if she wants to share something, but no one is here to share her pain and Dilemma.

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26 comments:

  1. Lovely and emotional part..

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    1. Maaneet ki relationship thoda aga badh rahi hai par maan apne carefree nature ma hai koi responsibility nahi hai geet ki aur geet apne aap ma hai wo maan and friends sa durr rahe rahi hai par ek incident na sab bigad lia geet na jo kia wo uska nazar ma sahi hai par maan na apne mu ma jo aya bola aur geet ka baat vi nahi samjha..maan ab geet ka hona aur na hona ka koi khayal hi nahi..felling bad for geet conditions koi vi nahi hai uska liya aur saath ma..
      Waiting for next part..
      IF Id Mona90

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  2. Awesome update
    Maan unknowingly hurt her
    But she mask her feeling
    His friends behave like jerk
    How can they made it issue for small mater
    Geet unknown to them if she didn't allow them that means they should respect a girl privacy not everyone like Nisha and ridha
    And maan in his anger he too forget that she is dependent on him
    Har bar hurt karna phir sorry khe Dena kitna assan Hai
    Hira2010

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  3. maan should think about geet too.........sooooooo much insensitive u r maan.......

    awesome update...

    loved it very much...

    thank u very much fr d lovely update...

    eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

    continue soon plz...

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  4. Nice update dear Mann came to know that Geet insulted his friends and he left to talk to them and came back late not talk with her

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  5. SUPERB UPDATE
    MAAN UNKNOW TO GEET CONDITION AND LAUGH AT HER
    GEET DID NOT ALLOW MAAN FRIENDS ENTER HOME BEC OF FEAR AND THEY THINK THIS IS INSULT AND BROKE THE FRIEND SHIP WITH MAAN AND MAAN IS ANGRY WITH GEET AND WENT TO PATCH WITH HIS FRIENDS WITHOUT ASKING WHY GEET DID LIKE THIS AND HE DID NOT TALK WITH HER ATALL AND NOE SHE TOTALY BROKEN

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  6. for a second I really thought Maan might be having some feeling for geet but no.. why he doesn't understand what she want.. always making fun of her ... I k ow she is not intelligent enough for maan but that doesn't mean she don't understand anything.. and I don't think geet anything wrong..
    she don't know them well enough.. so what she said no to them..

    poor geet..

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  7. IF id- anjeeborg
    Loved it
    Geet did not allowed his friends to enter and maan is upset because of it and did not talk to her
    Maan should also think from geet`s angle to

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  8. Part 6 : they r becoming comfortable with each other. They spent a quality time . A bond is on the way of building in between them, hope soon they both will realise the inner feeling .

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  9. both versions are equally good Mitu.....
    with Hinglish dialogues sometimes it is very confusing....now all English dialogues are easier to read.....

    to get rid of continuous pace a shake is needed.....although Maan and Geet are having friendly relation but for how much period....so this recent Armaan and Rahul incident is required.....right now Maan is angry and Nisha has put ghee over it to burn more but when Maan will realize that what Geet did is just her girly instinct that forced her to not allow Rahul and Armaan to enter house when her husband is not home is right in its place then he will repent and hope their relation will move more forward....

    I think it will be Adi who will make Maan understand Geet's side of story.....

    awesome....

    waiting for next part....

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  10. hi thanks 4 updating! superb update! Geet gives Maan almond milk! she is scared of his proximity! Maan laughs at her! he always makes fun her n she is hurt by this! Maan doesn't knw! His friends come home bt she doesn't let them in! she is all alone! Nisha tells Maan! he is angry with Geet! he leaves n retuirns late! Geet upset! Maaneet nt talking n nw 3 days passed! Maan didn't let Geet explain! She was right nt to let them in as she doesn't kwn them well enough! Maan fails 2 understand Geet! his friends r more important 4 him! Geet lonely! she has no one 2 talk 2 her! Maan ignores her! he thinks only of himself! update soon. khwaishfan IF

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  11. loved the update poor geet hope maan understand her really waiting for next part

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  12. geet bearing hr insult wen ever he laugh at hr he having his care free life but
    he have to inform hr before sending his friends their gert didn't know them neither maan told hr anything than y she let strangers in maan didn't talk to hr after this incident fr him his friends respect is imp not geet he hurting geet by totally ignoring hr were she will go and pour hr heart

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  13. nice update.

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  14. This niaha is so dramebaaZ
    ..
    N Armaan to overreacted...
    Poor Geet feel so lonely ...

    Maan is taking granted to Geet ...

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  15. Amazing update
    Both are immature isliye both are right on their place
    Feeling bad for geet
    Maan's ignorance geet ko aur darkness ki taraf le ja rahi hai
    Beautifully written
    Loved it

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  16. Feeling the pain & hurt of Geet...thanks to Maan's immaturity & insensitivity. How he makes her feel...And now his friends...His friends are more important than his wife? That he doesn't even care whether she ate or even lived...where will she turn to? I hope Maan's mum comes to visit them and finds out the truth. And gives Maan & his friends a piece of her mind and a slap as well to wake up their ideas. Maan's friends are not even being human to her. And what kind of rights are they having on Maan even after he is married. I feel the hurt, pain, silence and withdrawal of Geet...very sad and emotional...

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  17. I least expected this from Maan actually. Especially since their relationship was becoming friendly, adapting to one another living together. I thought that he would at least understand Geet's heart and her feelings...be more sensitive to her feelings & needs. But no...Super disappointed with Maan. I am worried for Geet. What will she do now? Where will she go? She has become silent...withdrawn...

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  18. feeling bad for geeet
    as a girl the way she behave with maans friends is r8
    atleast he must have told her before
    n nisha ..
    she is trying to make distance between maneet
    when will maan think about geets feelings too
    nice part

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  19. Awesome and emotional update!!Maan is really insensitive...she was so scared...he laugh at her...unknowingly he hurt her so much but she is bearing ...Armaan and Rakul came to Maan's house...Geet felt uneasy to let them inside in the absence of Maan...its hurt Armaan and Rakul so much...Nisha is really a drama queen....she tells him everything....Maan is so angry on Geet...he stopped to talk to her and not eating in the house also..he ignores her.....Poor soul she is right on her place....she felt lonely...he didn't see the Geet's condition...she turn silent mode....Loved it so much...waiting for the next...

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  20. Part 7 – geet was doing everything for him like a good wife. But he was mocking her every now and then. And he believed what her friends told, never cared to ask her what happened. He was angry on her for not letting them in. he should have told her before hand, so that she would have let them in. it was his mistake he took everything wrong. Now he was not talking with her. She felt more hurt with his behavior than his friends. Hope that she will not do anything drastic in her depression.

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  21. Nice update...
    Maan in mature behaviour is hurting geet now....
    I hate Nisha...

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  22. Feel bad fo Geet. Maan and his friends are quite immature

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  23. geey should start her education

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  24. starting part is cute ..
    i loved to see maan nok jhonk ..
    bt at same time i dont like maan's care free behaviour taking geet's feelings so casually
    i understnd he dont want to marry geet noe he accept their relationship bt atleast being so ignorant towards a person who is supposed to be ur life partner is not gud ..
    in the last part i hate how maan immaturely behaves ..
    agreed that he is angry at geet for not letting his frnds inside the home bt for once he not think through her perspective ..
    what wrong in it if she think of her safety nd dont let them in .
    moreover now the situation is different ,before he stays alone so it doesnt whether his frnds stay in absence of him or not bt now there is someone also stays with him n for person like geet who comes from a totally differnt society ,her deccision is not wrong..
    he should tried to understnd that she dont want to insult his frnds .
    nd that vamp nisha add fuel to fire ...
    poor geet ,now again felt all alone ..
    i so hate maan is this part ...
    someone should knock some sense in him..

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  25. Nice update dear
    Loved it!!
    Felt sad for geet.Geet was trying her best to serve him as his wife and was doing her wife duties. Maan takes Geet for granted and taunts her .Geet felt miserable with his words and situation that she veils thyself.Was it necessary for Armaan to take things on his ego and maan without thinking just yelled at her.poor Geet was feeling miserable as she couldn't share her pain and thoughts to anyone

    IF id: anu5

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