You are my Habit
(Aadat Hai Tu Meri)
CHAPTER 4
Note
Yes, Geet doesn't know English but here all the dialogues have been written in English because of many readers who doesn't know Hindi and Moreover I need google Adsense Approval and for this, I have to write in English most of my matter.
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He found all the lights off of his one single room apartment... where he lived like any other student of his age. There are no massive luxuries but the apartment had all comfort.
He released his stuck breath to find a small figure sitting in the corner of the balcony with a mug in her hands. He wondered that she doesn't even hear door sound.
He first went to get freshen up.. well he was forming a speech to say sorry.. without the word of "sorry".
"Maan!! just says her sorry and get rid of this stupid guilt feeling" he made a face and twitch his eyebrow after looking around in the washroom.. he is feeling like.. he is back in km. Today.. his washroom was unexpectedly clean and tidy, his lips stretched in a small smile as he remembered Geet words.. "kabaadkhana (Garbage box)".. yea indeed his room was a Garbage box before Geet came to live here.
He decided finally to break the ice and take her out as compensation of morning unpleasant incident and introduce her to his group also. Yes.. this will be his sorry, his smile infected with his brilliant thought and he wiped his wet masculine body with a clean towel and wore casuals for now.
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He coughed and startled the poor soul who is sitting all lost in her own misery. Geet turned her head in the jiffy and sighed in relief after seeing her known devil was standing on the balcony's threshold.
She gave a questioning look to him than the door of apartment and Maan understood his gesture.
"Actually... I had a spare key with me" he said and try to look into her eye to know about her mood.
"I will set the table in the meantime just go and freshen up" she rose from her place and took her mug also but Maan didn't leave her way when she gave him again questioning look.. "now what??".
"Umm... I were thinking to show you around.. I mean you visit Ahmedabad first time and it will be a good explore for you "
"Move... I have to warm the food" Geet said in her cold voice.
"Noo... we will take food outside itself so, just go and get ready fast ...babes" Maan just hoped that she wouldn't reject his offer.. and from her face... it's clear that she is in no... nonsense mood right now.
"Do you want to leave me alone in this unknown city to get rid of me? if you had so much problem with me then take me back to mom instead of leaving somewhere in an unknown city... I didn't know how to even use trains or any other transport"Geet voice choked and Maan watched her in disbelief.
"What the hell.. is she thinking about him?"... he will leave a girl like her in the city all alone to get rid of her.. did he look like so heartless animal to her or what..?? He gave his most dangerous look to her.
"Are you thinking that I'll leave you there in the market... Man!! Have you seen my mom... she is still here in my head... if I even think like this then she is going to beat me after making me run in the whole city" he told whatever come in his mouth.
"Or else you would have left me naa..If mom isn't here in this equation." Geet said moved inside the room.. leaving Maan.. gaping over her answer.
She kept the vessel of Daal at one burner and on another one, she placed "tava (Flat Pan)" to prepare.. "hot roties (Bread)" for him. This is all her duties and she will fulfill... no matter how much he had hurt her with his tuti phuti (broken) Hindi.
Maan had 440 volts smile on his face after eating the first bite of her hands.. she is indeed her mother reflection when it comes to cooking. Ohh.. he relished his food after 6 months but his soul made a face as his guilt increased 10 folds now.
"You scolded her and didn't even ask forgiveness and here shamelessly enjoying her cooking.. that is so unfair to her Maan... Just confess your deeds man" this is what his inner-self screaming.
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"Umm... food was good)"
But he received a cold straight nod in answer.
"Vo... I was saying actually, you have to shop at the market and I am also free today. So we can go out if you want" he pressed the back of his neck.
"No... I didn't want to go"
"Umm actually... I didn't know that you placed papers in my bag.. or else why would I shout like that... I" but he was cut by Geet in middle.
"You want coffee or something else I want to sit in balcony for some time"
Maan sighed as he could see her changed behavior with him.. and didn't like it at all. She was a wild cat so she should act like one naa.. why this serious quite war.
He nodded in yes then no.. she left the room.. to get some fresh air and cool down her burning heart.
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Maan was pacing fro and tho in the room.. when he yelled in pain and danced on his one foot.. after holding another one from the knee. He scanned the floor and found girly broken hair clip there with. He crushed Geet for a moment.. and rubbed his foot very dearly but the morning incident flashbacks in front of him.. how had he thrown all her belongings in revenge.. and this broken hair clip surely a result of his act. He guilts deepen more as she didn't ask him anything to buy especially when she had limited stock of everything now half of the things is surely broken from it also. He was now adamant to take his wife out for shopping and introduce her with his group also.. or else delay could create the problems in his friends group.. already he hides his marriage news from last six months and they could come here anytime.
"Go and get ready geet.. we are going on an outing"
"I don't want to come with you"
"Tu kiske saath jao gii padaosiyo ke" Maan smirked after using her favorite stances on her only.
"Then with whom.. you will go.. neighbors"
Geet gave him a murderous glare as she got his mischievous voice behind the taunt.
"Yes... I will go with them only" she smirked to see his priceless face.
He composed himself... "But darling.. this service still not available here" he laughed to see her burning red face in anger.
"Yaar ok.. sorry.. fine" he crushed to see her questioning face... This girl is going to make him say sorry in Hindi with full stance.. "maine kaha.. maaf kar do subha ke liye.. abb aaya samjhe".
"(I said sorry for morning yaar... now got it)"
Geet just twisted her lips.. and scrunched her nose little bit.
"Abb tu chal meri maa.."
"Now come my grandmother"
"I don't want to go"
"I swear to you Geet.. if you didn't get ready in 5 minutes... I will take you like this only"
Geet murmured some crushes on his stubborn nature and left to change her saree.
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All of your answer
Many got the main essence of the story but many are still blaming only Maan.. common girls... anyone bound to react like this only.. he isn't a saint but a hot-blooded young boy. He also in the same situation as Geet and trying to cope up with the situation.
For me both are innocent from hearts... they are reacting on situations but had no ill or hard feeling for each other. Their upbringing and difference making some situations... a little bit complicated. Well, no one had any doubt now... but if still, you had then I would like to say... at the end of the day this is an imaginary story and I am also not a perfect writer.. so have fun and enjoy... whatever I am able to serve you here.
And please no more women and men right fight here as I wrote this story keeping a simple boy and a girl in my mind and just give them my favorite character names.
A point will come where Geet also react foolishly than what should Maan do... hold grudges for whole life?? No.. but you would want that Maan will forgive soon Geet and live happily with her.. I am just trying to do justice with my all cs.. here. If he said something then after true realization he asked sorry too... then I can't blame him for anything.
They can't turn love birds out of a single night but to create a bond between them... they need time.
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nice update. If id is cherukuri9
ReplyDeleteNice update dear I ready this story till Geet birthday and he asked his friend Nisha to drop Geet to home and left for work after that no update dear
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ReplyDeletewonderful update....
Maan is trying his very best to say sorry or can say pretend like sorry and wanted her to understand he is sorry.....
so he planned outing but Geet refused because she is hurt by his shouting and actions.....
but in the end she is getting ready to go with him....
waiting for next part....
jaldi jaldi pichle saare update de do....I badly want to read from the point last time you stopped updating....
Nice update...
ReplyDeleteFinally Maan realized his mistake n said sorry to Geet...
Hope unka bonding good ho jaye...
Maan ke frnd Koi problem na start Kare related Geet....
very nice update maan really feels sorry
ReplyDeleteIF id sanum23
ReplyDeletenice ud
maan came back he decided to apologize to hr
but hesitated and geet behaved coldly
but seeing all things clean and arranged neatly he felt happy but soon guilty grow more
he try to take hr fr shopping she rejected
and thoughts he try to leave her at unknown
place to get rid of hr he was like (wat she thinks about him ) at last he apologised and threaten hr if she didn't get ready in 5 min he will take hr like that
Hira2010
ReplyDeleteOK I understand your position so I will imagine geet saying Hindi
What to say maan babu guilty guilty
Geet WA silently silently
Well she right at her point can't trust him
Or he also same fighting with his new found married life
Wonderful storyline!!! They 4 far apart from each other but very innocent at heart. They r trying to adjust with the situation they r in. Maan's behaviour has made r thought about him as a Cruel hot headed person but they still seem innocent in their act n even in argument o me. I have just started reading n read all 4 parts in one go. Waiting for the next dear.
ReplyDeleteNice update maan try to say sorry to Geet and want introduces with his friends nice update loved it maaneet going for shopping wow waiting for next part
ReplyDeleteinstead of apologizing he is talking about everything.. ππ
ReplyDeletea small apologize will melt geet heart.. and he talked so rudely to geet now she thinks that he will left her somewhere in the city... I hope maan Manages to win geet heart
Amazing update
ReplyDeleteMaan is feeling guilty for his behavior
Isliye he decided ki ghar jakar wo sabse pehle geet se sorry bolega but maan sorry ki bajaye saari baate kar raha hai
Maan is impressed by geet's cooking
Maan is missing geet's wildness he don't liked her silent behavior
Geet don't trust him because usse lagta hai ki wo usse City mai kahi akele chodh dega
Last mai maan usse apne behavior ke liye sorry bolts hai
Loved their sweet fight
Beautifully written
Loved itπ
Awesome update....
ReplyDeleteloved it....
Maan feels guilty due to his morning behavior with Geet...
Now both going for shopping....
Want to know mitu r u gonna repeat all parts again dear...
Becoz I'm eagerly waiting for part 15 dear...
Part 4 – nice update. Maan so much trying to say sorry to her but could not say seeing her angry face. He tried make fun but still no use. He was sorry that he broke her things also. He was ready to take her to shopping but now she was not in mood to go with him. Finally she got ready. Maan wants her to meet his friends also. Hope that he will not introduce her as his maid as geet will not come to know if he introduced them in English.
ReplyDeleteIF - Madhuri53
hi wonderful update! well written! Maan feels guilty n tries 2 apologise! Geet upset n rightly so! she is direct with Maan! he enjoys the food she cooked n adamant on taking her out! she has to go with Maan! he seems 2 b trying! update soon. khwaishfan IF
ReplyDeleteFabulous update:) loved it.
ReplyDeletehahahahaha
ReplyDeletenice nakhre dikhane wali geet
nice
I think she should study too
Superb part..
ReplyDeleteSahi bola maaneet ki situation hi aisi thi ki koi vi aisa react karega..
Maan sorry bolna ka chakar ma hai par bola hi nahi jata wo word and geet ki cold behaviour sa usa guilty hai par wo samjha raha hai aur apne sara baat ko samjha kar usa geet sherni ladaku chaiha ya aisa wali nahi lol.. Geet fully takar ki hai kya andaz hai maan ko ans dena ki..
crazycutee
ReplyDeletesuperb uupdate
maan soul is restless knowing he is at fault and to retify his mistake and solve their diffrences maan decide to take her out and introduce her to his friends group
Superb chapter
ReplyDeletegood maan apologise to her but she sounds little stuburn, but anyway usne akhir maana liya aur ab apne dost ko milane le ja raha hai good going maan.
ReplyDeleteawe poor geet i wish people understand english is just another language its not a mesaure of intelligence
ReplyDeleteloved the update ..
ReplyDeletei loved to see how maan trying to apologise bt its not that easy ..
he already felt guilty n trying to make up for his mistake ..
however geet still hurt with morning incident bt she doing her dutiess .
maan really enjoyed geet's cooking n finally say to sorry to geet bt again he got her cold beahviour ..
last prt was cute ..
atleast its better they become frnds rather stay like strangers .
Nice update dear !! Loved it.
ReplyDeleteMaan was in gulit stricken state and wanted to apologize for his conduct. But Geet was all set to answer him back and was not obliging to his words but were fulfilling her duties showing him her cold shoulder. He is all set introduce her to his friends.
IF id: anu5