Saturday 18 February 2017

Waqt.. The Eternal Love - Book 2

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WAQT SERIES 
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2nd Book - Waqt.. The Eternal LOve - chapter 56 onward - ongoing



Author"s Note
Hey girls! Well you are wondering for sure that why i divided this one Fiction in 2 Books. So here is your answer guys. Well, this story had two phase of Maneet LIfe in it and one title didn't suit well to other one that's why I divided this Fiction. PLease Don't read 2nd book if you are not a reader of 1st book as both books are connected with each other. Regular readers could enjoy book as much as they want.



Prologue



Time is a mystery like fruit is covered in ice.
We have to wait till ice melt and unfold mystery.
This is a simple story like time but has a mystery like ice covered fruit.
Some time things is not so simple as they seems.
Mystery is like storm which can take your everything
WE have to fight from fate and time for fruit.
what is fruit of time? only time can tell us.







 1st Book


"Waqt ka ye fasiala" Summary 




This is the story of a famous business tycoon "Maan khurana" and his wife "Geet Maan khurana". The first book of Waqt series "Waqt ka ye fasiala" started from the point with lots of mystery. Where Geet is working in Maan's office when one day Maan comes with his daughter "Mansi khurana" to the office who is only 8 months old approx and clicked instantly chemistry with Geet at first day only. Which amused everyone but not Maan. Priya is introduced as Maan's second wife in starting this is what Geet knew but Mansi is the daughter of his first wife who is dead for the world and priya too. They later left on the office trip with Mansi too with them and they had attacked  by rouges on them which is through Maan's second wife "Priya" (there is lots of mystery about who is Maan wife). Maan and Geet shared a private moment too when Maan is almost in unconscious status and not able to controlled his feeling. Geet knew, he is married and felt guilt but he take care of everything.. satisfied her restless heart. They did lots of shopping for Mansi and Geet got attach with Mansi beyond limits, anyone would say she is her mother only. Maan used to admire geet from far. Later Priya mat with Geet and shocked beyond her wits to find her cousin akka "Geet" all safe and sound who is none other than Maan's first wife too and Mansi's mother for real.Maan didn't want to disclosed anything to Geet for now so he sent her in room and thrown Priya out from mansion to revel the biggest truth of his life that he didn't marry to her ever that was just Priya illusions only.
Priya called the Pammi.. who is Maan's step mother and her so called partner in crime who wants to destroyed Maan that why she planned against Geet.
Priya too lost her baby and husband in that accident along with Geet so on elder persuade Maan did a play to marry Priya but he saw her to ill treating Mansi and thrown her out of the room.
Then the past revel that how Maan comes to know about Geet who is still alive but suffering with partially memory loss. How he planned every second to make Geet come back in his life. How he planned Mansi and her meeting in his office which went successful. How he included his family too in his plan.. his Dadimaa.. His younger brother Yash and his wife Meera too? Then how he made Geet move to mansion in the pretext of her safety from priya? How he take care too of Geet's brain delicate status?
Over all this part of waqt series had their post marriage story that how Geet declared as dead and how Maan found her and make her back in his life. How he made her with her daughter Mansi?










Author's Note For 1st book

Some of my experience through this FF...

Thanks for the all support which I got through this FF. They way you all accepted me as writer and encouraged me throughout the whole journey it's recommendable. I am the writer who got fabulous response despite of show ended. I seriously got 325 likes for this FF many time in past that too in barren forum when all are inactive. I wants to mention few names here whom I got as my friend.. Ruby, Sumiyariya, prachi, nalni dii, keenu, mansi, dona, Priya dii, Siri dii, vallidii, Kiran dii, sirf (sri devi), dhakdhak22, Tanvi and many more.. not remembering anymore name.. really really sorry if I forget someone who is so close to me. Prachi, sumiya they both made this FF a pics movie with the fabulous effort to search the pics for me and Mansi. Whoever gave me appreciation for picture that is there in reality because 70 percent pics are searched by them only. Ok prachi is heartthrob fam of Mansi.. am I right prachi? And sumiya and prachi usually fight for updates as one is Haq heartthrob fam and one is Waqt and I seriously enjoyed their lovely fighting... it's felt out of the world to get so much love. I can't forget one more person because if her I am writing this FF.. and she is none other than but Sonia dii the writer of "Mere papa Maan". She encouraged me.. too away my all worries and said me to write without any fear all will accept me. She is the one who commented first for my FF. Thanks to kick me that to write waqt or else I never able to recognized a writer inside me.. wishing you a happy life ahead.
This is not the end of Waqt.. but the end of first book and second book is coming in blog with lots of answer of your questions about maneet marriage and why Mansi born after 5 yr of their marriage.
 It's nearly 90,000 plus words Fiction which will be still continue in 2nd book and I am sure it will going to cross 1,25,000 lakhs words too in overall.




2nd Book




"Waqt.. The Eternal Love"





Introduction



This book will has their pre marriage story till the time of Mansi birth and future story of their relation. How Geet is able to accept Maan in her life? How will they fight with Destiny? Or would their love will lost with storm of time or would they able to put it back at the place? This book will surely had a teenager Mansi too. So overall this part is going to be a mixture of maneet childhood love and Mansi childhood fun including maneet romance of past.
Who want to read 2nd book of Waqt series please join my FB group as I will post all blog link and password there and if you had no FB id then please tell me.. I will send you blog link and password through IF pm.. but facilities available only for my known and responsive readers.   Have patience too for my reply as I had my personal life too.







Character Sketch 



Maan - He is one of shrewd personality for the business world but when it's come to his family.. he is more rather cute and soft specially for his wife Geet and his daughter Mansi. He is disciplined and ruler for hia family too but didn't bind anyone with his decisions. Possessiveness and anger run in his veins though genes of his forefathers. Overall Bhar ka sher ghar ka chuha.. ;).

Geet - the sweet lovely and pampered wife of Maan khurana but with some circumstances, she lost her memory and now struggling to put back her life on right path.

Mansi - the little symbol of Maneet love.. only 10 months old but naughty is like hell. She loved by all but yearned for months for her mother before.

Dadi - strongest pillar of khurana. She is a dream of every newly married. After all she loved her daughter in laws more than her grandsons.

Yash - younger brother of Maan, supportive and loves Geet also as his sister because of their childhood bond.

Meera - wife of yash. She came I mansion after Geet fake death news and took Mansi's mother place in the absence of Geet.

Prathvi - khurana's advocate and Maan's buddy.

Tia - small 3 yr daughter of prathvi, she lost her mother too and apple of eye for his father.

Pammi - Maan step mother and second wife of his father.

Annie - biological daughter of Pammi but opposite from her.

Priya - Geet's cousin only.. or read first part of Waqt series to knowing about her more. 





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Waqt.. The Eternal Love


This is Book 2 and a continue part of Waqt ka ye Faisala




If any one Want "Waqt ka Ye Faisala Link Please Contact me through My FB Page 


Chapter 56

After 1 month
Finally Geet and Maan in home and Maan took her directly to their room now at least she recognized him as some known member and she believed he is her husband and want to know her past life too so Maan promised her that he will tell her every day one incident of their past life but she will not take any stress as it's not good for her damaged brain cells.


"Maan! !! We are home now at least now start my past story please" Geet pouted and Mansi is sleeping on her chest.


Maan sighed and sat near her and took her soft white palm in his broad one.


"I will Geet.. I will.. but not now.. you should take rest right now and at least for tonight than from tomorrow I will show pictures, videos and narrates you past life one part to you but for this you have to give rest to your brain cells hmm" maan popped tablet in her month and placed water glass on her lips to gulp tablet in.


After taking 2-3 sips she turned her face from glass and wiped her lips after making so many faces because of bitter taste of medicine.


"Ok.. but no excuses for tomorrow..." she said firmly but suddenly her eye turned wet and automatically she saw in Maan eye.


"Geet!!! What happened ? Shall I call doctor?" Maan cupped her cheek in worry but Geet nodded a no and hang her head down.


"Maan !!!! I felt so empty from inside.. I have nothing to cherish... you whenever I saw Mansi and you ... my mind just roam and try to remember you and her... I want those unforgettable memory with me again.. how I forget those days when I become a wife than a mother ... I felt so empty maan so empty.. I want to remember everything but I failed every time not even any burr images comes in front of me.. I felt like a blank tv" some more tears rolled down on her cheeks and vanished in her nighty.


"Geet! !! Memory can be create every second which we live with our loves one.. you know when I lost you.. I also felt like this but see your Krishna ji made us one once again and our Mansi had her mumma papa both.. see Geet now everything is alright and about your past life.. I am here naa everyday I will give you a memory to cherish all your life and tell you one past incident also so you this blank tv soon be cable tv .. don't worry" maan smirked to see Geet eye popped out on his comment and she whacked him on his chest playfully.


Maan took her in his embrace and hugged her near his heart. Geet always felt peace in his embrace.
"Maan!! I am so lucky that I got you even after my disability" Geet said without thinking and Maan immediately parted her from himself and saw her with angry red eye.


"What did you say? Come again"

"Sorry" a meek reply comes from Geet.


"Dare you say anything like that again Geet or else I will take you right than for a hard love making and I promised for this" Geet flushed to hear his naughty kind of threat.


"Maan" she moaned slightly.


"I am serious" Maan said sternly.


"Then I should repeat it often" Geet hurriedly went inside her quilt and covered herself till head to toe.


Maan was is little shocked with her answer and smirked.. he bent little and took her in his embrace with quilt also and whispered near her ear whilst quilt is still between them and Geet is going redder every second under it.


"So my baby wants something adult.. but sweetu we need to wait little bit more as I want our reunion very very special" he laughed as he felt geet wriggling body under quilt.
He placed one pillow on Mansi side and took Geet in his embrace and slept on her side after whole 9 months of separation, she is willingly sleeping in his arms. He got his dead love back after all hurdles.. he won at last his love won now he just wants very dangerous punishment for pammi and priya only.


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In Morning


Mansi opened her eye with first ray of sun and sat their whilst rubbed her does shapes big eye because of sleeping than saw here and there got her father who is sleeping other side of Geet and she took her own unique way to reach him. She first climbed on Geet stomach and than in one small jump she is on Maan stomach and Maan opened his eye too feel something crawling his chest. He never sleep in deep sleep as some where he knew no one is here to take care of Mansi instead of him so he always wake with any small moments.


"Arre mera baby utta gaya" Maan embraced her small form to his broad chest.


"Haaa.. ahaha" Mansi shrieked and throw her hands in air.


"Ummm" Geet too wake up with their conversation and stretched herself in Maan embrace and rest this head on Maan one shoulder and kissed Mansi cheek tightly.


"Good morning mera bacha"


"Aieee aieee"


"Where is my good morning wishe  Mansi... ask from your mumma.. papa ko tu koi pyar hi nahi karta"


"Mansi !!! Your dadaa is biggest drama baaz" Geet pressed tight kiss on his one broad naked shoulder and said a sweet good morning and Mansi jumped to see her two favorite people laughing whole heartily and this like party for little soul.

"Hmm I am managing now but after some days I want theses raw buds here ..." maan pressed Geet rosy lips with his finger and pressed than his own.


"So Mrs. Khurana.. did you understand how to say perfect good morning to your hubby" Maan winked.


"You are shameless" Geet blushed profusely and hide herself in his crook of neck and pulled Mansi also in their hug.


"Now you both devil leave me so I can go and get ready for office" Maan said from both the girls.
Maan needs to see his office now from last 2 months he is away from his business only adi and yash is managing everything but clients want his attention especially on their projects.


"Ok now you go to Jim and I am going to take bath than will make breakfast" Geet sat on the bed and took Mansi


"As you say boss" maan stand up and give Mansi on Geet lap and left for his regular exercise.


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Precap - Next Part Will Be tomorrow

45 comments:

  1. omgggg i cant beleve it .. thankkkkk u soooooo muchhhhhh Mohi :) for giving us our Mansii backkkkkkkk yupppiii .. im soo happyyy

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    1. heheheh Yes you are first .... thank you for comment

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    3. my pleasure dear .... I think I had read this part already tell me na i still remember last update maan in anger left geet something like that right ??

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    1. Beautiful update

      aww i just love maaeet moment .. and mansi as usually darling and the most sweetest thing love u baby <3 muuuaahhh .....

      you know i loved it depiction of the mind state of Geet, confused as if her mind is creating all the blankness but her heart knows her Maan and her baby ..in her unconscious state she knows him and her sweet family ..

      Hope This time Maaneet bond is even more stronger to with stand all
      odds and hurdles in future !!

      i think its an old update rigt ?? .....

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  3. Thank you so much for your return mitu... Will be waiting for next update...

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  4. Nice update waiting for next update

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  5. Lovely part..
    Geet apne past life ka warema jane ko bechan hai maan usa samjhta hai wo daily ek ek incident uska saath share karega and geet ko uska brain ko relax rakna ko bolta hai..
    Naughty maan and shy shy geet.. Mansi baby apne parents ko saath ma khush dekha ka happy happy hai..
    Waiting for next..

    Socha tha Waqt 1 book phir sa read karna ka baad 2book read karka comment karungi par update dekha ka control hi nahi hua wait karna ki:D socha book 1 and 2 ek saath hi read kar leti hun ;)

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  6. I think I had read this part already. Maneet are back in km. Geet is upset as she is unable to recall the beautiful moments with maan and her daughter. Maan promised geet that he will make her remember her past by telling her each part of her life everyday. He can't tell her whole thing in a day as it can be harmful for her brain. Morning was beautiful as their daughter woke them up by climbing on them. Waiting for next dear

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  7. Nice update..
    First of all thanks Mohi for f=giving the summary of first book..
    Now geet knows that she is the wife of Maan and mother of Maansi but she does not remeber anythign..Maan assures her that he will make her remember her past slowly and he is happy for having his family together

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  8. Nice update..
    First of all thanks Mohi for f=giving the summary of first book..
    Now geet knows that she is the wife of Maan and mother of Maansi but she does not remeber anythign..Maan assures her that he will make her remember her past slowly and he is happy for having his family together

    Rashmi


    Upar wale commnt me naam likhna bhool gayi thi

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  9. Lovely update
    Maaneet are back to km
    Geet get upset because she can't able to able to recall the memory
    Maan make her happy by saying that he will tell her each part of their past so that geet can charish their past
    Maan can't tell her whole past in one day because of her health
    In morning Mansi wake them up by climbing on them
    Naughty ma'am and shy shy geet
    Waiting for next update
    Update soon

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  10. It is after so long we are reading an update.
    Thank you.

    IF id: impoojaverma

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  11. Awesome update... Geet is trying to remember about her past but shes not able to get any blurr images also and felt bad about her situation but loved the way maan promised her to tell her past one by one so that she can cherish and not to stress on her brains...loved the way maan becoming naughty with geet and geet becoming all red red with shy and accepting her present....loved their morning moments and one relief is that maansi is very lucky to get both her parents love now....
    IF ID: SRIIF

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  12. Rading waqt after so many days
    it feels ike an eternity
    i loved this story so much
    thanks for continuing
    mansi is so sweet n cute
    i just love her
    eager to read what will happen next
    continue soon
    if username loveguruDD
    fb username Mohul Choudhury

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  13. It feels so good to read it again..Thankyou so very much for reposting..
    And yeah I've given my feedback previously 😋😋

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    1. I had restricted his story that time so again posting here for all and I need around 10 post and 15000 views as well for taking amazon affiliate program for this blog so just adding update here... instead of giving old link pw

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  14. after so long..😍😍😍😍
    awesome update.. poor geet.. how much she carves for her memory to come back.. she don't even remember Mansi birth.and I guess that hurt her the most..
    maan is too good.. always know how to lighten up geet mood.
    loved their morning Family moments

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  15. hi,tania khaled here.
    finally ur update come.nostalgic with maaneet moment.geet is memory less.but maan made her so good that she can't tell anything about her emptyness.after long days they all sleep together.maaneet moments r just awesome

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  16. lovely update ...
    geet trying hard to rememer her past bt she doesnt rmember anything nd thatswhy feeling upset ..
    bt loved the way maan consoled her nd assure her that they will new memories that she will cherrish now on nd soon he will tell about their past happenings one by one..
    morning part is fab..'maansi is to cute ..
    nd maan being naughty in between tease geet which make her red with shy ...


    my if username- deepa111

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  17. Priya .. Pammi .. Abhi bhi aayenge .. Kya ...
    But I am wantt to read .. this.....
    Geet want to know her past ...
    Hehe Maansi ..
    Happy to see her most favourites.. smiling together ...
    Waiting ...

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  18. Superb update
    Has missed Mansi a lot
    A very beautiful start of waqt sequel 2
    Loved bold and confident geet
    Eagerly waiting for maaneet and Mansi moment

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  19. I don't know but felt like I read this part before too I remember that you started to write about their childhood where maan start to tell geet about their or you change the track
    Thanks again for update I will read previous parts first then comment
    Hira2010

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  20. Nice update dear Geet want to know about her past life as she is feeling empty but Mann told to not stress her brain much as it can affect her health as he will say say daily one past

    Preethi

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  21. Naughty naughty maan
    Finally geet giving a chance 2 her past and want 2 knw every details abt it
    Hope its gets to a good point were geet remember everything slowly

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  22. Amazing update
    Maaneet are back in km
    Geet apne past ko yaad Na kar paane ki wajah se disturbed hai but loved the way jis tarah maan usse promise kart hai ki wo usse daily ek incident ke baare mai batayga aur iss tarah wo apne past ko cherish kar sakti hai
    Maaneet and Maansi moments are sooo adorable
    My if ID is manjeet6

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  23. feeling nice to read the updts after a long time...awesum part....loving it more now....continue sooon
    IF name ushankitvc
    FB name ushankit Vc

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  24. awesome part. my IF id is cherukuri9

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  25. lovely update.. so finally maan and geet are together and are happy our cute doll looks so cute :)
    my if id is Zaara, but will follow the blog and comment with the same id

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  26. Awesome update I just started reading this Ff so I don't know what happened in the previous one.. but anyway can't wait for u to continue
    My Id is heart882

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  27. Awesome update...mansi is cute.Feeling toooo gud 2 read ur updates after a long tym. Waiting for ur next update.
    My IF id is sravanthi 93

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  28. thanks for continuing the wonderful story..loved this ff very much Lovely update maaneet returned after 1 month.. man was taking care of geet.. geet felt bad for not remembering her past specially as wife & mother...lovely maaneet moments.... maan wanted to make special day to move on their relationship.....maan vowed to punish pammi & priya...cute mansi was enjoying sweet morning with her parented... naughty maaneet...excited for next..IF- uluvmg

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  29. Thank you for update dear
    Maaneet KM me wapas aa gaye n geet wants to know more about their past...love maaneet n mansi's part

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  30. Amazing update!!!Maaneet come back to KM...Geet wants to know about their past life...she feels bad for not remembering her lovely life with Maan and Mansi...Loved the way he taking care of her is so lovely and beautiful...Loved Maaneet Lovely moments...Mansi is so cute and sweet....Loved it so much...Waiting eagerly for the next update...

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  31. Geet still has no memories abt her past
    but Maan's love n care is all that she needs
    will she ever get her memory back
    MSK getting naughty with his wife so cute

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  32. amazing update... are you going to update the story till the end... maan, geet and maasi are happy together,, geet wants to know her and maan promised to remind her their past everyday...

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  33. lovely part .. geet wants to know everything abt past life and maan taking slow .. my id fantesy

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  34. SUPERB UPDATE
    MAAN PROMISE GEET HE WILL TELL HER PAST AND GET PROMISE FROM HER SHE WILL NOT STRESS HURSELF TRYING TO REMEMER HER PAST MY ID IS CRAZYCUTEE

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  35. Part 56 – maan left her with mansi in farm house and he set her free. Told her she can give back mansi when she turns 2. Here the first book ended.

    How come book 2 started ‘after one month’ and it was not any flashback, so got confused.

    You showed us that now they are happy family despite of geet forgot her memory. Maan promised that he will open every page of their life in front of her.

    IF - Madhuri53

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  36. Was a very big fan of book 1 in IF then lost contact...finally found this...wow!!! so happy...
    hope you continue this story
    IF- anonymous.me

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  37. Plz wanna read the first book... plz provide the password... it looks very interesting ��

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  38. hello would really like to read the first book please provide password..its amazing. IF ID: pateler1

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