Monday 20 March 2017

Project- You are my Habit (Aadat hai Tu Meri)- Part 8



You are my Habit 
(Aadat hai Tu Meri)
CHAPTER 8








Other side Maan is feeling terribly confused, angered and sad too. He doesn't know, how is he going to cope up with a girl, who is 360 opposite to him in everything.


Neelam too didn't call at all as she was on an official foreign trip and didn't get time to call to Geet and Maan.


Today is the fourth day of their cold war and this is when Maan received a call from his mom.


"Maan! How are you, my son? How is my shona Geet?" Neelam asked with affection.


"All is as same as mom and how are you? Missing you so much" but Maan tone gave up his mantle status in front of the lady, who keep him in her womb for 9 months.


"Is there something, you want to Tell me Maan? why are you sounding dull bacha? Geet... is she fine... call her Maan... I want to talk to her." Neelam felt restless with the silence from another side.


"Mom vo... I don't wanna talk about her.. I never have seen someone with such disgusting thought" Maan said with pure angry tone.






"Maan..." Neelam said angrily... "Is this way to talk about your wife? This is what I teach you?"


"Then what should I do mom.. aarti karu uski... she literally had broken my group and you can't even imagine, what has she done? Damn, she doubted on Armaan n Rahul... I mean how could she? They are my chuddy buddy yaar... how... I don't know Mumma... How to explain... I couldn't able to meet eye with Armaan anymore... she denied their entry in the apartment... how the hell she did something like that mom, just call her back mom... I can't even able to breathe with her under the same roof... I hate her mom... hate her so much" he poured his all frustration finally in front of his mom, who isn't only his mentor, but a first friend too.


"What an irony Maan?" She paused for a second to control her nerve to not to shout at him for his stupid behavior, but Maan frowned with his mother reaction.


 "You cared for your friends and you cared for your friendship too, but not your wife... for god sake Maan if they are your friends then who is she Maan? A stranger or just responsibility which your mom forced to you... who is she Maan?" Neelam paused for a moment.

"Did you ask her if someone said something or troubled her? Did you ask her about her behavior? What if someone is troubling her behind you back and her behavior is just her consciousness... with whom she share her pain and fear Maan... have you thought in this direction ever".


"Mom.. you are unnecessarily blaming my buddies?" He winched stubbornly.



"No.. I am not... I am just trying to show you the mirror of reality and what had she done wrong? If she was conscious for her safety? Who will take responsibility if her doubts turn out to be true even one percent... just answer me Maan... is your anger able to give her back the lost respect again."



"Mom.. she knows them."



"Yes, she just barely knows them so, she feels danger in the presence of two merely known men and banned their entry into the apartment because her husband was not there to save her from any unexpected danger... How is this all to you sound Maan?"


"She is a girl Maan and she had the ability to see, what you can't and for any girl, safety is more important compare to anyone so called self-respect."

 "And if your buddies are really a gentleman than they themselves didn't like to invade any woman privacy in her husband absence."


"I.. I.. mom"


"I am really feeling ashamed that I failed to teach you about girl's respect and respect their privacy. She did absolutely right whatever she felt opt for her safety and you can't snatch this right from her just at the name of your so called friendship now if you have slight shame in you then go and ask sorry to her... console her that she didn't do anything wrong... I know... how it feels when you are in such embarrassing situation"


Neelam hanged up the call in anger whilst Maan is sitting on the bench stunned with his mom giant lecture on Women Safety and Self-respect.


"How could she expect me to know all this? Neither I have a sister, nor a girlfriend... wife is nothing, but an unexpected event of my life...  how could I know... what insecurity girls had in their heads" Maan thought with a pout but he felt angry on Nisha. She too is a girl... but she didn't take any initiative to correct me. He sighed... this is his responsibility to look after his wife... not theirs.


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He entered in their apartment at the time of evening after 4 days or else he chose to come at late night just for sleeping.



Geet frowned to see him so earlier and feel a somersault of fear in her belly. Did he come with some purpose? Is he going to throw her out at this time? So many negative thoughts hovered in her brain in just span of 60 seconds.




Maan comes and stands in front of her, still rubbing her forehead from where to start whilst she clutched hard the sides of her suit in fists... fearing from his any action.




"I am sorry." she shocked with his sudden advance that has frozen her for a moment and next second he did something totally unexpected when he embraced her and whisper "I am sorry" one again in her ear. She knew the meaning of this three words as he taught her a few days back.



 



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Precap - Geet's Reaction will be unexpected this time





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28 comments:

  1. Heyyyy am first great update good to see maan understand the situation but read karte karte pata nhi chala kab khatam ho gaya really excited to see next part

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  2. Nice update. Good that maan's mom made him understand. Waiting for the next update. If I'd is Cherukuri9

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  3. Superb & a fabulous update:):):)truly loved the way Maan's mum set him right on the importance of a wife & women's safety:):)And after hearing from him mum, he starts mulling over what she said & finally apologises to Geet...Looking at precap am curious to know Geet's reaction...Super super curious...I think a showdown is coming & I think Geet has had enough of being insulted & looked down upon. But what will she say? Looking forward to next update.

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  4. good to know that maan realized his mistake...
    neelam managed to knock some sense in him
    .. but not Everytime she will to that.. he has to understand geet too.. like she is trying to do with maan. trying to understand his way of living life ..

    loved it

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  5. Amazing update
    Loved the way jis tarah maan ki mom usse ye realize karwati hai ki girls ki safety uski first priority hoti hai
    But I loved maan's POV wo kaise samjega kyuki uski koi sister tou hai nahi aur Na hi uski mom ne pehle ye sab baate sikhai hai
    Finely maan apologised to geet
    Eagerly waiting for geet's reply
    Beautifully written

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  6. IF id-anjeeborg
    Maan`s mom made him understood the situation
    Geet is so scared of him now
    Waiting to see geet`s reaction

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  7. Nice update dear Mann mom calls him and talk with him he told what went with him she explains about girls fear and he came home and asked sorry to her

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  8. hi thanks 4 updating! amazing update! superbly written! Maan fails 2 understand Geet! his friends respect is more important than Geet! Maan feels disgusted at Geet! his mom calls n Maan talks bad abt Geet! he lashes out his anger! his mom miffed at his thinking! she shows him reality! he fails 2 think abt Geet n her respect! his mom lectures Maan! hw can he expect Geet to allow 2 strange men in her house wen she doesn't knw them well enough! Maan realises! he goes home! Geet scared seeing him! he says sorry! Geet stunned! want to see a stronger Geet! hope Neelam decides that Geet shld continue her education! she needs this for herself! update soon! khwaishfan IF

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  9. O Wavo maan is so innocent.. I m feeling good now that he understood and said sorry... I hope he can also see nisha intention

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  10. SUPERB UPDATE
    GOOD MAN MOM PUT BRAIN IN HIS MIND
    NOW HE UNDERSTAND GEET DID RIGHT SAVE HER DIGINITY
    HE APPOLOGISE HER BUT I WANT GEET DONT FORGIVE HIM EASLY

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  11. Neelam put sense in him about a girly instinct to be safe guaraded from unexpected event.....
    but good thing in Maan is that when he understands his fault he never shies away from asking forgiveness.....when he understood that Geet was not at fault he said sorry for his misbehavior and hug her.....this is a very good gesture and all this credit goes to his mother who always taught him to respect women.....

    if all mothers in this world teach their sons to be respectful to women then there will be no crime against women and then there will be no one to lecture girls what to wear and what not to do.....

    awesome...

    waiting for next part....

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  12. Characters & Concept: Is perfectly written.

    Part 1: First part itself stole my heart. Maan's indifference thoughts and Geet soft, clam nature and strong bold answer won my heart.

    Part 2: I loved the action Neelam took against her son.

    Part 3: Geet's tear made me cry. Her converstaion with Neelam tore my heart. Glad Maan realize his mistake.

    Part 4: It's so funny Geet's cold shoulder force Maan to say sorry.

    Pat 5: Each parts getting awesome! Loving the akwards moment between Maaneet.

    Part 6: Their mini tea date was awesome.

    Part 7: No comments! Can't voice out who's feeling matter the most. Somewhere it's difficult for Geet and Maan too.

    Part 8: Glad Neelam's call made Mann understand Geet's inner thought.

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  13. Ok neelam gave his son a good knowledge about girl privacy hehehe
    I like maan statement he didn't had a sis or GF directly wifey jisko samjha kam hai
    Maan reached home said sorry he really did with out any ting of ego he said
    What will her reaction
    Hira 2010

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  14. Awesome part..
    Acha hai neelam na maan ki acha sa class lia hai and maan na sab truth bola hai apne frustation bahar nikala and neelam na samjhaya hai ki ek girl ka liya uski safety 1st priority hota hai naki kisi ka friends ka feelings and geet na jo vi kia sahi kia hai.. Maan ko kaisa pata hoga girls ka warema kyun ki uska life na koi sis nahi gf tha sirf ek wife mili hai wo vi fastly lol.. Finally maan na sorry bola geet ko ek hug dea kar par geet toh darr gayi thi maan ko aisa dekha ka..
    Waiting for next part..

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  15. Awesome ud
    his mom gave him lecture on girl's safety and respect to make him understand girl's insecurity now he get wat his wife going through and angry on nisha fr not guided right path he apologized to geet and embrace
    hr to comfort hr that he's their fr hr

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  16. Awesome story .. l just loved it :)

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  17. Part 8 – finally he said sorry for his behaviour. Hope that he understood what her mother wanted to say. He said sorry b’coss he understood and not as her mother told him to do. They were unknown to her and cant let them in as she was alone. But his friend nisha also failed to make him understand but accused him for his behavior for their friends. He hugged her and apologized hope that geet will understand him.

    IF Id - Madhuri53

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  18. Awesome story .. read all parts in one go ... :)
    love the way u portrayed characters they looks real and its gaves story a real touch thats the beauty of this story ...
    omg geet and maan both are poles apart ,maan doesnt want to marry geet thats obviouse even i Would have been in his place do the same n reaction ditto hota mera .........dont know what store for them in future ?? ...

    Like maan's mom she is amazing ... its true at the end of the day Nobody knows a child as a mother can understand and nobody on earth can ever love
    you more than your parents Hope she do not regret this decision in
    furute . lets see what store for them ...

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  19. both are immature and they are not ready for this responsibility The upbringing of both is very different how can they gonna cope up wid each other ?? i feel bad for
    Maaneet There is no mistake of them, just their luck is linked to one another...
    but they have such wonderful angle mom and she will never let them fall for sure ...neelam understand her son plight but she knew very well that his life partner was Something Else she brought geet with affection in her maan's life ... She knew what she was bringing to her maan....
    I am so happy to read something which is so close to real life!! usually we see shaadi ki rasam den SR etc etc in stories, but what we find in real life will be something like this!!
    well done dear Mitu u did a awesome work...

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  20. Itnaaaa badaaaa dhaka ! Maan apologized! But upfate is too short! Really dear when i saw ended there i felt bad . Maan tried to realize that has given me solace at the end. Awesome update ! Pls update soon n little longggg ��

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  21. Maan' mother is a true tea her

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  22. Awesome update.....
    Fillay he realized his mistake....
    Thank god his mom gave some great lecture to him....

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  23. Amazing update!!!loved Maan's mother....Loved the way she make understand the situation is so awesome...after that Maan realizs his mistake and finally he apologised to her...Loved it so much...waiting eagerly for the next...

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  24. I think Maan's mother should come and see how much poor Geet is suffering
    She is so hurt and its like all alone

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  25. ahh..finally there is someone who knock some sense in maan ..
    I am so happy to see neelam called maan nd showed him mirror ..
    whatever she said is absolutely right ,n moreover why armaan need to take everything on his ego ..
    i mean common ,atleast he must b sensible knowing that geet comes from a differnt surroundings n barely knew them..
    nd maan ,he finally understnd ,bt again is it necessary that u hv to be girl or a mother or sister to knows girl's insecurities ..
    now mr.buddu again come to apologise nd say say sorry ..
    letsee will forgive him this time.

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  26. Nice update dear
    Liked it!!
    Glad that Neelam could knock some sense in maan
    She showed him mirror and also was angry on his thoughts and words.
    He needed to behave wisely with geet as she was new to his culture of living. Glad that he could understand girl's insecurities and was ready to mend things between them but Geet was too broken with the happenings

    IF id:anu5

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  27. Found this link suddenly in my inbox..
    good going..
    continue soon..

    IF-anonymous.me

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