You are my Habit
Aadat hai Tu meri
Theme - Arrange Marriage
Neelam Singh Khurana - Mother of Maan Singh Khurana and one and only member in his life, she was running the business smoothly after his husband's death and take care of her son at the same time
Maan Singh Khurana - hair of a leading construction company but still need to touch the sky.. currently 22 yr old and doing his MBA through the reputed institute of India. He is living in a private accommodation all alone in Ahmedabad but most of the time his friend company him in the flat.
Geet Handa - A village illiterate girl... her family was a friend of Khurana family from last 4 generation and now her father died when Neelam Khurana did his last ritual and took Geet under her wings as would be daughter-in-law without paying any attention to her son... who is 360 degree opposite to her. She is an innocent village girl, who is never going to be accepted in their society and social circle.
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Prologue
An innocent girl who is illiterate but knew all duties as a wife. She couldn't read books but can read hearts and eyes, her heart filled with so much love and eye with dreams, but destiny made her helpless for marriage in this tender age of 19 yrs.
Otherside
He is doing his MBA from the top institute of the contrary and had his own Plans about every step of his life but the most precious person in his life is his mother Neelam, who comes above from everyone and everything. He is just 22 yrs old and going to take over his family business very soon. Of course, he had his own fantasy about his companion or say life - partner.
But Destiny decided a clash between two poles of the earth.
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He is doing his MBA from the top institute of the contrary and had his own Plans about every step of his life but the most precious person in his life is his mother Neelam, who comes above from everyone and everything. He is just 22 yrs old and going to take over his family business very soon. Of course, he had his own fantasy about his companion or say life - partner.
But Destiny decided a clash between two poles of the earth.
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Story 1
You are my Habit
Aadat hai Tu meri
Theme - Arrange Marriage
This SS had lots of Maan and Geet's scene and this is a light hearted story.
CHAPTER 1
In the Khurana's villa
"Maan !!!" Neelam said angrily.. "that was an order.. got it".
"Please mom.. I am saying once again.. I am still not interested in marriage and that to some village girl.. who couldn't even match me... forget about companionship or love.. how could you just destroy your son life for a mere known girl" Maan was really frustrated with his mom wired demand of marriage that too when he is studying and moreover with an illiterate girl. How could he balance his life with a partner who is just exactly opposite to him?
"As you wish Maan... Nakul pack my bags... I'll live with her in her house... just couldn't leave an innocent girl all alone.." Neelam said and marched back to her room.
Maan has been boring his eyes on her back in disbelief.. his mom.. his lovable mom is ready to leave him alone just for a mere village girl, couldn't she just get her here and encourage her for studies.. why all this marriage and drama.
He marched behind her in the room, where his mom was engrossed in packing with Nakul but he couldn't hold his frustration and angrily empty the bag on the floor in one move and shooting glares at Nakul. Nakul saved his own life and got hidden message of his master to leave them alone.
"Mom.. !!! Are you seriously leaving your Maan for that damn girl?? Ohh.. what was her name.. yes Geet" Maan hold Neelam's shoulder in his palms like a toddler as his eyes are reflecting same innocence and hurt.
"Maan" Neelam sighed little... "I have to leave my dear because those villager's heads aren't going to let her go from there before marriage".
"For god sake mom.. she is an adult and capable of taking her own decisions.. and as much as I remembered.. we are still in the 21st century," Maan said in frustration.
"Yes..!! 21st century but let me tell you my son... there are many rules which still not exist in books but exists in society... we can't fight with those villager's as they had their own rule and regulations and believe me Maan.. do I ever compromise when it's comes to you.."
Maan just shook his head in no and turned his face another side. His mom always served him best or what is best for him.. from bitter cough syrup to those fake scolding.. just all are for his betterment till today.. but why marriage... Maan whined like a baby.
"Then why..?? Don't you believe your mom anymore or you are enough big now to take decisions on your own... she is really a homely and good girl.. who will be your backbone all your life... She will not leave you even after I left this world my son.. and I gave my words to her.. now do whatever you want Mr.Khurana"
Neelam just sat there and drank the water from the jug which is placed on side stool attached to the bed.
He glared her because of she is talking all stupid talks of dying and all... "Then why are you bothering to ask me.. just say when and where I had to take rounds around the fire and finish this off," Maan said angrily and left the room.
Neelam sighed "I know Maan.. you are not with me in this decision at all but this is for your own good my son as I observed your company nowadays and those friends of yours are going to spoil you and your innocence, where another side, she was going to teach what is love, what is value.. she may be poor with words but she has a big heart and you need her more than she needs you"
Neelam called pandit Ji in the village and request him to get ready for preparation of marriage. It will be a small affair because of Geet's father death.
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He didn't realize... how soon his status changed as an unhappy married man from single happy bachelor, his mom doesn't take even a single day after Geet's father "Terri" (a ritual performed after 13 days of death). She didn't want to leave Geet alone in the village.. so she did everything very quietly and made them also did rituals in a temple.. under the blessing of herself and village sarpanch along with 4 or 5 more people from Geet sides.
Neelam could see her son denial in each and every ritual but she ignored it.. whilst Maan is sucking.
"Please forgive me... Krishna Ji! But this was his grandparents wish so was Geet's grandparents. I would have ignored this wish of them but the sudden death of her father left me with no option and I have to provide a safe accommodation for this little princess.." Neelam sighed.
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She welcomed Geet in her bungalow wholeheartedly and made her do all the ritual.. thus Maan was irritated but couldn't speak in front of his mom.. especially when she was overly happy.
She sends her in Maan's room with young girls of the family who recently gathered in Khurana's bungalow after hearing his cousin married than called Maan in her room.
"Mom!!" His disappointed voice always sent shiver in Neelam body but this time... the situation wasn't in her favor.
"I know Maan... I had snatched a very private right of your life... and you has been angry on me for it.. but that was your grandparents wish to see Geet as their daughter in law... but with time this wish vanished in the layer of distance between two families but after seeing that innocent naive girl at the misery of villagers. I couldn't stop myself to tied the knot between you both.. as I had believed in you for her protection.. you may be stubborn, short tempered and modern but I know there is a heart in you hard exterior.. so was my given values.. don't make her feel out of place.. because you never understand.. what is she going through nowadays? Don't make her cry Maan.. she is really very innocent.." Maan was going to leave her room when Neelam added in her speech. "I would choose her.. in case you make situation something like that in future" she remove her glasses and laid down on the bad.. "please close the door before leaving" Neelam heart cried for his son.. so another side she had peaceful sleep after 15 days finally.. as Geet is safe and protected.
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Adrenaline run through his blood veins.. his mom.. for god sake his mom.. literally adopted his so called wife.
"Damn!!! I am feeling Son-in-law.. in my own house" he murmured irritated.. "why did I have to love my mom so much? Can't I be like those who easily disobeyed their parents" Nakul caught his Sir in the corridor in wired position as Maan is talking with corridor's ceiling.
"Chote Saab" Nakul called him...Sir (Chote Saab)" this time he shouted in his ear.
"What the hell... Nakul !!! Are you on a mission to deaf me" Maan scowled... Nakul just nodded in yes then no... again yes and Maan left from there.. and rolled his eyes mentally.
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Maan decided to tell his newly wedded wife the reality of this relation at once and get free from this drama.. so he entered like a wind in their room and with closed eyes.. a spoke in one go what was in his mind till now.
Author knocking
(Imagine their conversation in Hindi as Geet didn't know English but I wrote this part in English but further I wrote all dialogues in Hindi with English translation)
"See... I am not interested in this all drama of marriage" Maan eyed her and hold his heart to hear a very loud cry or gasped or something but nothing comes as he expected.. "let's come to the point... I just tie this relation because of mom or else I am not ready for marriage and this relation" he said in one breath and prayed in his heart that this girl would able to digest this new information.
"If she asked you to jump in well.. would you do that also" she folded her hands just below of her blossoms and asked in really calm and soft voice.. which made Maan blinked for some moments as he was all ready for an outburst and here, he is getting ... what... mocked by a village illiterate girl.. who had a long tongue which is sharp as much as a knife.
"It would be better if I jumped in well instead of marrying you" Maan countered back
"Ohh. Really !!! Then why wouldn't you jump.. I don't remember if I hold your wrist or something.. huh" Geet mocked him and left to change her heavy embroidery Wedding dress.
"What the hell.. from which angle she looked innocent, sweet to my mom.. she is.. she is.. yes a witch with big sharp nails" he scowled and gritted teeth to see the close door of the washroom.
Otherside in the washroom, Geet wiped her tears with the back of her palm but still they are following on their own... her creamy cheek turned red and black because of kohl and anxiety turned into sorrow for life.. her husband didn't even glance in her way... forget about to see her at least once. she was illiterate but not so stupid.. she had handled her father work alone handed.. and she could show her hard self too whilst other side Maan was away from the difficulty of life because of his supportive mother.. and her care.. he is a pampered child of her.
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"Maan !!!" Neelam said angrily.. "that was an order.. got it".
"Please mom.. I am saying once again.. I am still not interested in marriage and that to some village girl.. who couldn't even match me... forget about companionship or love.. how could you just destroy your son life for a mere known girl" Maan was really frustrated with his mom wired demand of marriage that too when he is studying and moreover with an illiterate girl. How could he balance his life with a partner who is just exactly opposite to him?
"As you wish Maan... Nakul pack my bags... I'll live with her in her house... just couldn't leave an innocent girl all alone.." Neelam said and marched back to her room.
Maan has been boring his eyes on her back in disbelief.. his mom.. his lovable mom is ready to leave him alone just for a mere village girl, couldn't she just get her here and encourage her for studies.. why all this marriage and drama.
He marched behind her in the room, where his mom was engrossed in packing with Nakul but he couldn't hold his frustration and angrily empty the bag on the floor in one move and shooting glares at Nakul. Nakul saved his own life and got hidden message of his master to leave them alone.
"Mom.. !!! Are you seriously leaving your Maan for that damn girl?? Ohh.. what was her name.. yes Geet" Maan hold Neelam's shoulder in his palms like a toddler as his eyes are reflecting same innocence and hurt.
"Maan" Neelam sighed little... "I have to leave my dear because those villager's heads aren't going to let her go from there before marriage".
"For god sake mom.. she is an adult and capable of taking her own decisions.. and as much as I remembered.. we are still in the 21st century," Maan said in frustration.
"Yes..!! 21st century but let me tell you my son... there are many rules which still not exist in books but exists in society... we can't fight with those villager's as they had their own rule and regulations and believe me Maan.. do I ever compromise when it's comes to you.."
Maan just shook his head in no and turned his face another side. His mom always served him best or what is best for him.. from bitter cough syrup to those fake scolding.. just all are for his betterment till today.. but why marriage... Maan whined like a baby.
"Then why..?? Don't you believe your mom anymore or you are enough big now to take decisions on your own... she is really a homely and good girl.. who will be your backbone all your life... She will not leave you even after I left this world my son.. and I gave my words to her.. now do whatever you want Mr.Khurana"
Neelam just sat there and drank the water from the jug which is placed on side stool attached to the bed.
He glared her because of she is talking all stupid talks of dying and all... "Then why are you bothering to ask me.. just say when and where I had to take rounds around the fire and finish this off," Maan said angrily and left the room.
Neelam sighed "I know Maan.. you are not with me in this decision at all but this is for your own good my son as I observed your company nowadays and those friends of yours are going to spoil you and your innocence, where another side, she was going to teach what is love, what is value.. she may be poor with words but she has a big heart and you need her more than she needs you"
Neelam called pandit Ji in the village and request him to get ready for preparation of marriage. It will be a small affair because of Geet's father death.
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He didn't realize... how soon his status changed as an unhappy married man from single happy bachelor, his mom doesn't take even a single day after Geet's father "Terri" (a ritual performed after 13 days of death). She didn't want to leave Geet alone in the village.. so she did everything very quietly and made them also did rituals in a temple.. under the blessing of herself and village sarpanch along with 4 or 5 more people from Geet sides.
Neelam could see her son denial in each and every ritual but she ignored it.. whilst Maan is sucking.
"Please forgive me... Krishna Ji! But this was his grandparents wish so was Geet's grandparents. I would have ignored this wish of them but the sudden death of her father left me with no option and I have to provide a safe accommodation for this little princess.." Neelam sighed.
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She welcomed Geet in her bungalow wholeheartedly and made her do all the ritual.. thus Maan was irritated but couldn't speak in front of his mom.. especially when she was overly happy.
She sends her in Maan's room with young girls of the family who recently gathered in Khurana's bungalow after hearing his cousin married than called Maan in her room.
"Mom!!" His disappointed voice always sent shiver in Neelam body but this time... the situation wasn't in her favor.
"I know Maan... I had snatched a very private right of your life... and you has been angry on me for it.. but that was your grandparents wish to see Geet as their daughter in law... but with time this wish vanished in the layer of distance between two families but after seeing that innocent naive girl at the misery of villagers. I couldn't stop myself to tied the knot between you both.. as I had believed in you for her protection.. you may be stubborn, short tempered and modern but I know there is a heart in you hard exterior.. so was my given values.. don't make her feel out of place.. because you never understand.. what is she going through nowadays? Don't make her cry Maan.. she is really very innocent.." Maan was going to leave her room when Neelam added in her speech. "I would choose her.. in case you make situation something like that in future" she remove her glasses and laid down on the bad.. "please close the door before leaving" Neelam heart cried for his son.. so another side she had peaceful sleep after 15 days finally.. as Geet is safe and protected.
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Adrenaline run through his blood veins.. his mom.. for god sake his mom.. literally adopted his so called wife.
"Damn!!! I am feeling Son-in-law.. in my own house" he murmured irritated.. "why did I have to love my mom so much? Can't I be like those who easily disobeyed their parents" Nakul caught his Sir in the corridor in wired position as Maan is talking with corridor's ceiling.
"Chote Saab" Nakul called him...Sir (Chote Saab)" this time he shouted in his ear.
"What the hell... Nakul !!! Are you on a mission to deaf me" Maan scowled... Nakul just nodded in yes then no... again yes and Maan left from there.. and rolled his eyes mentally.
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Maan decided to tell his newly wedded wife the reality of this relation at once and get free from this drama.. so he entered like a wind in their room and with closed eyes.. a spoke in one go what was in his mind till now.
Author knocking
(Imagine their conversation in Hindi as Geet didn't know English but I wrote this part in English but further I wrote all dialogues in Hindi with English translation)
"See... I am not interested in this all drama of marriage" Maan eyed her and hold his heart to hear a very loud cry or gasped or something but nothing comes as he expected.. "let's come to the point... I just tie this relation because of mom or else I am not ready for marriage and this relation" he said in one breath and prayed in his heart that this girl would able to digest this new information.
"If she asked you to jump in well.. would you do that also" she folded her hands just below of her blossoms and asked in really calm and soft voice.. which made Maan blinked for some moments as he was all ready for an outburst and here, he is getting ... what... mocked by a village illiterate girl.. who had a long tongue which is sharp as much as a knife.
"It would be better if I jumped in well instead of marrying you" Maan countered back
"Ohh. Really !!! Then why wouldn't you jump.. I don't remember if I hold your wrist or something.. huh" Geet mocked him and left to change her heavy embroidery Wedding dress.
"What the hell.. from which angle she looked innocent, sweet to my mom.. she is.. she is.. yes a witch with big sharp nails" he scowled and gritted teeth to see the close door of the washroom.
Otherside in the washroom, Geet wiped her tears with the back of her palm but still they are following on their own... her creamy cheek turned red and black because of kohl and anxiety turned into sorrow for life.. her husband didn't even glance in her way... forget about to see her at least once. she was illiterate but not so stupid.. she had handled her father work alone handed.. and she could show her hard self too whilst other side Maan was away from the difficulty of life because of his supportive mother.. and her care.. he is a pampered child of her.
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Maan is not at all ready to get marry to geet but doing iy for his mom
ReplyDeleteGeet answering back to maan
Hahahaha maan thinking from which angel geet look sweet and innoncent to his mom
Waiting 2 read more
I like geet because she didn't kept my. In front of maan anger
ReplyDeleteHira2010
Nice update dear Mann mom make Mann marry Geet but Mann is not at all interested in it and same told to Geet on first night Geet answered back to him but in washroom see cried
ReplyDeleteJust loved it maaneet get married Geet illiterate but she handle his father work smoothly love the way Geet give answer back to maan
ReplyDeletesuperb prologue ..
ReplyDeleteupdate is really nice.
maan being forced to marry geet ,bt he thinks she is not compatible with him anyway .
he is not all wrong,any person like him wants an educated n compatible person as his life partner ,everyone has some expectation from his or her spouse. still not everytime u get what u think nd he should also trust in her mother ,she will never do thing something which is no gud for him.
she knows geet is kind heart nd an innocent girl who defintely love nd take care of him in all gud n bad times.
finally he married with geet nd neelam beware never do something with geet due becoz she choose geet over him.
maan without listening anything just said to geet that he dont interested in this marriage nd this marriage is nothing to him.
bt i loved that geet instead of crying or sulking she encountered bck him with her answer .maan surprised with her snapping him ..
while geet inside felt hurt that the only relation she had ,also turned his bck to her .
bt she will not sulk like any other girl, however she is illterate bt she knows how to handle work as she worked with her dad nd alone handled all the work
Lovely story...
ReplyDeletePoor Maan .. can't understand his mom situation...
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Geet is so innocent can't show her feelings openly also. .
Waiting for next update
If name : Riti.k
awesum start...have read the starting parts ...but yet enjoying reading it again...continue sooon
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Lovely update congrats on new story awesome prologue and cs maan is a well educated guy totally Mama's boy he loves his mother very much neelam seeing his son friends with wrong ppl didn't want him to lose his innocence decided to tie him up with geet who may be illiterate but is capable of looking after herself she just lost her father her only family neelam knows abt the promise of making geet their bahu but distance made them forgot the promise she knows what villagers will go to her so she forcibly made maan marry geet as she knows only geet can teach him values maan went and blasted geet telling he doesn't believe in their marriage he was expecting a crying geet a deal but geet was far too strong she shocked maan not once maan thought that in his anger he broke a girl's dream that also on first night
ReplyDeleteLoved the story
ReplyDeleteNice start
poor girl but can understand Maan's problem too
hi thanks 4 posting! love arranged marriage concept! lovely prologue! Part 1 - amazing update! superbly written! Neelam wants Maan 2 marry Geet is has was his grandparents as well Geet's grandparents wish! Maan helpless! Geet's dad die n Neelam has no choice! Geet is illiterate n Maan is pursuing MBA! Maaneet married! Neelam advises Maan! Neelam will choose Geet over Maan! Maan tells Geet he was forced 2 marry her! Geet questions him! Maan thinks Geet is nt innocent n sweet! Geet shattered! she cries at her fate! update soon. Khwiashfan IF
ReplyDeletePart 1 – so his mom made him forcefully to marry geet. He was not at all ready and fought against his mom. But finally he had to bow down to his mom’s wish.
ReplyDeleteShe was fulfilling what both’s grandparents had decided. She wanted to protect geet….from what.? Why she was not safe in her own village.?
Maan was straight and cleared everything in the start that he was neither willing to marry her nor he wished to keep any such relation with her. she was shattered hearing this.
Liked how she stood in front of him. she was illiterate but not stupid to understand what he wanted to tell her.
great concept good to see your new story nice beginning
ReplyDeleteCongrats for new story
ReplyDeleteLoved the concept
Maan ko apni mom ki zidd ki wajah se geet se marriage karne padi hai
He is getting angry on his mom but he love his mom so much ki wo unki baat ko maan na padta hai
Maan ki mom maan ki innocence ko bachane aur maaneet ke parents ki wish Puri karne ke liye aisa faisla lene ke liye majboor hoti hai
Maan apni frustration geet par nikalta hai aur wo usse kehta hai ki wo iss marriage ko nahi maanta
Loved geet's reply and her braveness
Maan was amazed by her reply
Beautifully written😘
Great start ...i loved the most is Geet asking back to maan unlike shredding tears nd became weak ....indeed tough days ahead for maan babu ..how she becomes aadat for him ..wanna see...continue soon
ReplyDeleteMy another fav. Story ..i can read it uncountable times diii
ReplyDeleteBut still waiting for new parts n will read old ones tooo
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Loved it
ReplyDeleteMaan`s mother forced him to marry geet. It was his grandparents wish
Let's see the journey of these two
Excellent part.
ReplyDeleteSpunky Geet..
ReplyDeletehow they will manage.. maan is not even ready to see her face Lt alone accepting her...
ReplyDeleteloved it
Mitu tumne ye story pehle bhi update ki thi.....
ReplyDeleteI remember it.....this time please don't leave it midway....
so Maan has to marry Geet against his wish as Geet is totally illiterate....he cannot imagine his mother literally blackmailed and forced him to marry her....
but Neelam had no choice as village people not ready to send Geet with them until she has some relation with them....
very interesting....
Congrats on the story:) Great start and very interesting. But feeling so bad for Geet yaar...going on to read next part.
ReplyDeleteNice concept. So they both got married young and couldn't go against Maan's mom. Let's See how Maan handles this marriage
ReplyDeleteMy fav Arranged marriage concept..
ReplyDeleteAwesome part..
Maan ka life ma uska mom sab kuch hai and uska mom na uski marg apne family friend ki ladki geet sa fix kia hai jo maaneet ka grandparents ka wish thi and geet ka father ka death ka baad maan ka mom na marg quickly fix kar lia and preparation vi.. Maan angry hai kyun ki geet uska match ka nahi hai village illitrate girl hai par apne mom ki wish sa majboor ho ka shadi karta hai and uski mom ab maan ka samna apne d-i-l ko choose karna ka option deta hai maan ko..
Maan room ma entry karta hi geet sa sara majboori story bol deta hai and geet ki reply usa shock ma dalta hai kyun ki geet ki activity usa innocent village girl ki nahi lagta hai..
Thanks for Reposting di..
Fantastic update!!Sounds interesting....Loved it so much...
ReplyDeleteAwesome update... Maan don't want to marry illiterate Geet but in front of his Mom's wish...Geet is hurt by Maan's bitter confession about their marriage..but handled situation very well...lets c how will she do to win Maan's heart..
ReplyDeleteI think she should start studies
Thnx for pm...waiting for next update
Awesome update... Maan don't want to marry illiterate Geet but in front of his Mom's wish...Geet is hurt by Maan's bitter confession about their marriage..but handled situation very well...lets c how will she do to win Maan's heart..
ReplyDeleteI think she should start studies
Thnx for pm...waiting for next update
superb update
ReplyDeletemaan mom want give support to geet and take her wings so that she can protect her from this cruel world and force to maan marry her who dont want to marry village girl
Amazing plot. Geet' character has blown me. I thought she would be a meek girl but she is quite strong. Interesting and I can expect some entertaining moments
ReplyDeletevery good and intresting start, love geet's reply and maan's irritation and mu about her.
ReplyDeletejust read the first part nice story can i have password for other parts my mkc1235
ReplyDeleteNice character sketch dear
ReplyDeleteInteresting prologue!!
I would love to read arrange Marriage story
Lovely start !!
Maan didn't want to get hitched so soon on other hand his lovable mother wanted him to get hitched to her princess Geet and wants to fulfill elders wish too. Maaneet's personality were in contrast to each other.with final bickerings and words maaneet were married and he found Geet to be strong head girl rather than a meek girl.
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