Monday 27 February 2017

Complete shot- A SPICY STORY



Complete Story

A SPICY STORY


it's sweet, 
it's spice, 
but this is what I like.


Introduction



Our life is full of surprises... it make us smile or leave us in shock or maybe  shocks can be proof sweeties too... hey don't be shocked to read this as this is life and we are puppets only, when sometimes life is full of spice and emotions and show all colors like sweet, bitter, sad or maybe love.
Yes, love..! love is incomplete without spicy of emotion in it or you can describe it as the package of all excitement and marriage a lifetime contract with them, So here is my story, where one couple is going through the same path.


'A SPICY STORY'


So this is a wired story of our Maan and geet' how they became one as Maaneet.



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There is a girl in the college, who is busy in flying paper airplanes in her classroom care freely as today her lecture is shifted for next hour so now all Students are free and busy in their own world which few are busy in gossiping and other antics. This girl has something unique in herself' she is the most devil girl in the class but all students love her like there life because of her helpful and mature nature. She is so cute' her big doe eye and light skin color. A beautiful scarlet hue on her features is completely a contrast of her daring and bold nature. She is a bully between her mates


"geettt" papu winched when a paper plane directly land into his chips packet' he is class motu and bhookad specimen.


"What motu   ' stop eating like hippopotamus and give my plane" geet said with smirked.


Yaa this girl name is none other than GEET sweet little name and she is also like a humming song without any outside world tension' always busy in her color full life.


But we all know naa we all desired something which is impossible for us' here is a boy in campus a mystery boy' no one know who is he in reality' he is well built man with killer looks but so bore always a bookworm' can't talk with anyone without something important' he so quiet type but always give glares when someone messed with him' his eye has spoken volume which is his best quality and our geet liked him' because of his true nature actually admire him' people say naa opposite attract' here is a lively example of this.


The man is none other than the most handsome dashing and arrogant  MAAN SINGH KHURANA' this is the only information which people knew about him as he has personal contract with college head also.


Geet liked msk personality too much because of his powerful aura' she admired him a lot because of his looks and shy nature..all her friends too know about it and tease her a lot for that..all her friends always encourage her to talk with him but geet refuse saying...that if he runaways by her approach..and all laugh on her silly antics..but in reality she is afraid... what if he refused...but what can we do with this heart which always beat with his own will and make other helpless.



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In one day in exam hall geet is copying from chits and maan caught her' but she gave a shy smile to her and he just shook his head and start to write his own paper and geet went to her la la land' but papu smacked her from back and she come back on earth and start her cheating again but not to forget stealing some glances in between..after exam she come out with her friends and start ga ga about him..


 "how much supportive he is yaar..not even complain about me...to that old flirty professor..." geet go ga ga over him


"if he too supportive and help u..so what next??????" one of her friend said.
 "what next??????" geet said.


other friend: geet u also make bet and win na..now what about a bet in which you have to ask your Mr-I-am-so-hot Mobile  number..and smirk..

geet(ST): kamino ne fasa diya..what too do abhi back out kiya to all will tease me to the core... Don't worry geet puttar chak de pate..


geet: ok done me usse uska Mobile number leke rahungi...


that day she got perfect chance to talk with maan so she ran and caught him in the parking on his bike.


"Maan" geet called him from behind and he stopped in his track and remove her helmet and see behind in geet direction.


Geet come near him and she is taking long breath and maan rolled his eye to see her antics like always' he knew she is most naughty and sensitive girl in the class' many times she made him target of her teasing but he ignored her.


"voo.. thanx for exam room... tune bhaada nahi phoda naa" geet said shyly.


"hmm its ok" maan said and start his bike again.


"sadu" geet murmured


maan '' You said something?''


geet 'no..wo haan can i get ur mobile number??????? she gave him most innocent look which melt him instantly.


maan ya sure..."my number is **********..."


geet jumping inside the heart but maintain...maan wait for her to say something..geet look back where her friends encourage her to say further..


geet: wo didn't u want my number.. you know as.. ohh I mean friends


maan: (shocked but knowing her naughtiness) yaa if u dont mind..geet happily gave her number..


Geet thought something then extend her hand toward him' and said with very cute smile "friends".


First maan is shocked as who is always be center of attraction in class' asking him to be friend when she had lots of friend and he knew her attitude also' she never asked friendship from other and here.


"Ok don't be shocked you supported me like friend so asking you' now give your hand my hand is paining" geet said impatiently.


Maan smiled to see this cartoon and gave his hand in hers and said in husky voice "friends" making geet heart flip-flops in anticipation.


"Can I go now" maan asked as she is standing in front of his bike.


"kya yaar your friend is standing here at least ask her if she wants lift" geet said with pout she is like that only mann ki baat hotoo per.


"ok geet you want lift" maan asked sarcastically.

"aise nahi ache se puchu" geet said.


Maan glared her'


"Ok ok leave me on xyz road" geet said and sat on his back sit.


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it has been 5 days geet having his number but that sadu never ever send a single message..being impatient geet send a msg..and got immediate reply from him like he is only waiting for her...


After that day they became best friends even geet's group welcomed maan whole hearty. Maan also start to admire geet as she fulfill a empty space in his life. The place of spice replace by emotions, this is the first time maan made some friend for himself and spend time with them. 

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One fine day maan was sitting in college garden and doing his project' when geet came near him.


"hi maan"


"hi geet"


She settled near maan with her tam jham (her books and bag)' when maan didn't talk further she start to peep in his laptop to see what is he doing.


"What are you doing sadu?"


And received a glare from him.


"jalebi bana raha hu kha lena jab bann jaye" maan said sarcastically and geet start her cribbing to her beloved Krishna jii.


"Can't you answer in straightway sometime" geet asked with angry pout.


"Can't you asked some sensible question sometimes" maan also said in same tone without taking his gaze out from his lappy.


"Huh sadu kahi kaa"


"geet economics project bana raha hu" maan said


"tu meri bhi help kar de' see how boring all this" geet winched like little girl and made maan smile.


Maan start to guide her but geet loved to make him troubled' and he always glared her in response and she gave a innocent smile like what she did' there is going on full of spicy.
Suddenly some boyes come and start to tease geet badly' and she hide near maan as they are not college students but some outsider' maan turned his palm in fist.


"Go from here" geet said in dangerous voice...maan shocked seeing her new side he know she is bold but this much..god give me a break..


"alle heroine ko gussa aa gaya" one bully said to tease maan more.


A straight punch land on his nose and bully is so shocked' and our tigress start to shiver to see their fighting a real fighting' maan is beating them like hell' even college head come and order maan to stop but he nowhere to listen' how can they eyeing on his girl' maan stopped in his track' god what is he thinking his girl and geet'. No they are best friend.
Maan friend took him and geet from there' and geet did first aid of maan' and gave him good scolding for herogiri' but maan again glared her.


"tu kya dekhta rahta,  ki vo tumhe tease kar rahe the" maan said in danger voice.

"maine ye kab kaha' we should complain in office instead of this hero giri" geet also said with baby face.


"If I saw them again' I will beat them more' I swear" maan said again with so much anger in him.


"Why are you worried for me so much" geet asked in trance.


"Because I love you dam it" maan said then realized what blunder he created.


Geet mouth is still open.


Maan come on his knees in front of whole canteen' and said
"geet I know I am so bore' but everyone say naa opposite attract' ''WILL U EAT MY HEAD FOR LIFE TIME WHICH I LOVE MOST ABOUT U''... and i also love you because of your ture and bubbly nature' will you become a daughter in law of my mom' will you become a chachi of my nephew' will you become a sister in law of my brother" maan said with his hand extend.


"Mr. Donkey can't you ask directly' will you become my wife and marry me geet" geet said with a smile on her face but her eye is numb a little' she also come on her knees and hugged maan for her dear life' that day earth got one more wired couple in the world' there is unbreakable trust between them' but their life is full of spicy' full of love.


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From so many days geet is cribbing to know about Maan and he finally decide to take her his mansion and make her meet with his lovely dadi maa' and mom also and not to forget stick dad also,  he is little scared how will they react to see geet.


Maan car come to halt in front of km and geet in awe to see km or you can say five star hotel' geet eye widen like soccer ball' she saw maan once and said "this is your house".


"Hmm why what happen" maan asked casually.

"What happened? damn man who are you?" geet asked in dazed.


"geet I am business tycoon MSK who is running his business at age of 15 but doing his studies also" maan took her hand in his and make her understand.


Geet gasped' "You are the MK".


"Hmm but for you' only your sadu" maan said with smile.


"Why don't you tell me before" geet asked with little hurt expression and tears.


"Because I want a girl for me' not for msk' I want be your sadu geet" maan said and took her chin in his thumb and forefinger.


"Hmm but now your family not love me because I am simple girl naa" geet asked cutely.


"They love you geet as my mom and dadi will find a partner in you' and my dad find his daughter in you' I know that" maan said confidently to her.


Maan is right always as dadi and mom welcomed geet whole hearty and his dad also like her for her bold nature' at last like always Geet won their heart too.


Dadi talked with geet parents and their marriage is fixed after one month.


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After three years… they both have a little boy named Dhruv and always lived like a spicy family with all emotions and love.


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 someday a simple story tell you funda of life


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THE END


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21 comments:

  1. Superb OS
    geet is bold but scared to approach maan
    maaneet become friends
    maan in full MSK mode beat all the boys
    geet is so cute
    such a spicy love story
    maan finally confessed his love and they got married

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  2. Nice os dear in this Geet is bold and nauty girl and make friendships with Mann as he know how she is and admire her one day some boys teased Geet and Mann beats him Geet scholded him for fighting at that time Mann proposed her she accepted

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  3. nice update. IF id is cherukuri9

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  4. Hira2010

    Awesome spicy story
    With maan geet love flavour
    Geet full bindas
    Maan babu AP k toh bath
    Finally love happens

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  5. hi loved this superb fab story! wonderfully written! Shy Maan n Naughty Geet! Geet admires Maan bt afraid of his rejection! a dare leads them 2 talk! Geet is bold! Maaneet friends! Maan confesses after that incident! unique proposal! She is shocked seeing his mansion! Maan reveals his identity explains! his family accept her! they get married n have a son. awesome end! Khwaishfan IF

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  6. NICE STORY... SWEET AND SIMPLE ...LOVED THIS NAUGHTY & CUTE GEET AND SERIOUS BUT HOTTY MAAN ;)
    IF : pinku04

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  7. IF ID- anjeeborg
    Simple maan and bindass geet nice combination
    Oh so maan wants to complete his education.
    At last they got married

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  8. lovely os..sweet n spicy//
    geet being bold n daring girl still shy to confess her feeling to maan n admire him from far.
    while maan also like her personality bt only mind his own business.
    bt the dare actually help geet to first interact with maan nd both of them become frnds ..
    also the proposal is very unique afterall its maan proposal ,it had to different .
    bt geet too accept it nd confessed her loves.
    knowing his real identity she is shocked bt maan make her calm down.
    even his family whole heartly accept her .
    both get married nd blessed with baby boy ///

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  9. Awwwww it was such a cute story
    loved it
    I hope they have a cute daughter too ;)
    Grt one SS

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  10. Awesome OS
    Loved chulbuli geet and silent maan
    Beautifully written
    Loved it

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  11. lovely update...very well written...wow sadu loved bubli geet... maan beat goons for teasing geet .... he proposed her in a college canteen... geet shocked to see him as MSK.... but dadi & other family liked her simplicity.. both got married & after 3 yrs maaneet had baby boy named as dhruv...IF-uluvmg

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  12. Superbbb....
    Loved Maaneet moments sooo muchhh....
    Maan proposal is Awesome tooo.....
    Loved it...

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  13. fabulous story...loved it
    ushankitvc

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  14. Awesome and lovely part..
    Truly sweet and spicy os hai..
    Geet cute,naughty and bubli girl hai toh maan asusal serious msk type..
    Geet sab ka saath masti and prank karti hai par maan ka taraf attract vi hai..
    Nautanki sa maan sa friendship kia geet na aur dheera dheera pyar hona laga and kuch goons type ladko sa geet ko vi bachaya par maan ka Unique style proposal best tha lol..
    Maaneet apne family and dhurv ka saath haapy hai..
    Thanks for posting..

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  15. Lovely and beautiful OS dear!!!Its really sweet and spicy....Geet is so cute and beautiful....Loved Maaneet lovely moments...

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  16. Beautiful os...
    Geets and maan chaaracter wwrre different yet made for each other...

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