Thursday 23 February 2017

Waqt Part 61

Chapter 61


Back to present

"Geet" Maan called out her loudly but no response.
He again searched her in their wing but looks like his jaan in the mood of teasing him.. or maybe it's her antics to show him her joota wala gussa for not attending a family tea today evening.

He smiled.. a smile which adored on his face from the time, Geet started to cooperate with the situation. He could feel the same heart of his geetu was again starts to beat.. only for him.


Meanwhile his eyes caught a beautiful sight in the garden of his wing... his Mansi was playing around her mother whilst she is sitting on the swinging chair there and writing something... he frowned "what is she writing?.. stress isn't good for her but when did she listen to me... jab dekho manmani.


He hurriedly freshens up and went downstairs with long steps and jumping two stairs at one time.


Mansi squealed in happiness to see her Dada is coming there and with small steps tried to reach to him but before it, Maan was there in front of her and took his sweetheart in his protective embrace and showed her little face with kisses but their little moment didn't able to broke Geet's trance.


He placed Mansi back on the floor and quietly reached near to her and try to peep in but didn't get proper view.


"Geet! !!" She startled by his sudden heavy voice and dairy had fallen down from her lap..
"Maan !!! App bhi naa"


"Mai bhi naa kya.. what was you doing?... should I have"
"Haa.. haa I know .. that I am on medicines.. stress isn't good for me.. blah blah.. but Mr. Khurana.. this is something which I like to do for myself.
"What is this?" He frowned and bends to pick up the beautiful covered dairy.


"Waqt.. the eternal love"

This is what Geet had chosen for the heading of her diary.


"What is this? ?" But before Maan check it out, Geet snatched it from his grip.
He gritted his teeth and called her sternly "Geet! !!"


"No.. you supposed to not to read it.. this is only for me"


"Accha !!!! What is in there.. which you have to hide it from me" he placed his palms on the side of his waist.

"This is something like... like daily journal... not exactly journal but .. actually.. I want to write some of special moments of our life.." she was struggling with words but her un-shaded tears gave away the untold story of her insecurities... she wants to store her life moment so incase she forget them again... she could read them back.. she doesn't want to lose more.


Maan securely took her in his embrace.. "I understood Geetu... but I'll read it..chori chori" and he winked to see her frowned expressions.


"No.. you can't.. I feel shy naa.. and embarrassed too"

"That's not my problem sweety... do you have any manners or not Geet... I am here from half an hour and no coffee tea... not even water" he glared her.

"Tea.. !!! Uska tu naam bhi matt lijiye"

She parted from his embrace and back again her little warrior avtaar
"Where were you haa? We all have been waiting for your presence but when did baba Maan Singh khurana listen to other wish"

"Shona meeting thi... and about spending... so here is your slave mam" Maan bend little in front of her... making her smile little bit on his antics.

Nakul interpreted their little fighting session... with the tray of evening snacks... which Maan ordered before freshening..

Mansi too comes there and hold the rim of trolley for support and stand on her small soft toes to see what was there in trolley... Maan and Geet smiled and Maan gave a biscuit to his little princess which she happily holds in her little fingers.

But she wants one more thing to hold it in other palm... so Geet gave her little piece of banana... and let her play with it... she was already in total mess after playing around in garden and water... so Geet thought to change it finally later when they move in room.
Both Maan and Geet sat in the garden itself with their respective drinks.

"So what had you written?" He asked

"Umm.. just one incident... when you left us in farmhouse and go away for 2 yrs"
Her line made him differ to past... One month ago he was all ready to destroy his life... he still doesn't know... what exactly obsessed him that moment... to be taken a step like that.

Flashback
One month ago

Maan is driving harshly toward the airport. He wants to leave this city as soon as possible.


"mujhse ye rishta nahi samjhe aata Maan.. sab kuch strange hai.. sab kuch.. I didn't feel anything for you.. didn't feel anything for you.." her sobbing with her cruel words are ringing in his ears and piercing his heart in pieces.*

He speed up the car in and changed gair from 3 to 4. Tears of anguish are floating in his deep black eyes. His heart knew that he will be here in her city last time. All old memories are rushing in his head and making nostalgic.


*Maan shoot angry glares to see her there in desert forest. He came here for campaign and how can madam let him go alone.. so she hide behind in his jeep and now landed herself in problem.*


"Swimming nahi aati tu pani mai stunnt karne ki kya sujhi thi.." Maan is ready to burn her alive.


"See.. see Krishna jii.. he should say thanks to me or here he is scolding your little child.. ye kya acchi baat hai.. mai tu yeha aayi inhe manne company dene.." but she is cut by young Maan who is hearing her muttering quite clearly.


"Geettt !!!" He gritted teeth and clenched his jaw.. "and by the way not little innocent kid.. yaa kid but rebellious one".


Geet jaw dropped to see the audacity of this man.. "Geet.. ignore baby ignore.. he is taking advantage of your love.."


"Kya hai.. ??? I lub u naa jaanu" Geet pouted and stretched her both hands like a baby toward him to carry her but he smriked and left from their with his drink. Left her behind with opened mouth.*


Maan felt more angry on himself to see his own heart is trying to delude him and still beating for her.. the same lady who didn't paying any heed to his pain. The pain of their separation. She is the one who forget their moments but damn he is still living in her memories, memories of their love, their togetherness. How she used to be his tail now he went far -far away fro him.


*Maan caught Geet in his masculine arms before she touch the floor and hurt herself.


"Dyan kaha rahta hai tumhara aur ye kaam servants kaa ya tumhara.." I glared her but she pampered by me a lot to get scared from me. She feigned a pout and smacked my shoulder.
"Don't scold me.. I love to decorate mansion on every Deepawali naa" she said in her childish voice and my heart melted like ice cream in summer with her antics.*
Anger overpowered his all brain cells and he speed up on the empty highway. He eyes spitting fire but damn if not she than her memories didn't leave him in peace.. her sweet smile, sparkling eyes, button nose, narrow waist, perfect curves.. luscious lips.. just everything about her made him crazy. His life was running as per her wish from last many years as she was the dominating freak and he loved to give in for her wish.. and today he hated it.. yes !!! Just because of this surrendered heart of him.. he has to leave alone all his life. Today he hates her to the core to become the reason of separation of father daughter.. she wished for it and he compelled it like always. How much he wants to strict with her but her one puppy pouting look is enough to melt the storm into his heart.


Precap - more about farmhouse night..?


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22 comments:

  1. Read all the 5 parts at the go
    Priya is only full of herself
    Love geey as a baby full of life but scared coz of her mami and mama
    Maan making dream home and geet saying it as her doll house
    Love maan grand father
    Ufff this pammi is always a trouble maker
    Love cute moments of maan and geet love it

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  2. Nice update dear Geet is writing dairy about her life Mann came and asked not stress her brain and told that she write about the farmhouse incident

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  3. Read all the parts...

    Thanks for full update bank..
    Missed it so many days...

    Maaneet past incedence n moments was superb...

    Lil maansI n lil Geet both antics are same so innocent n mischievous...

    Both p and p are so cunning n selfish...

    Lovely bonding between maaneet love it...

    ThanKs for updates

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  4. So geet is writing a diary so if she forgets again, then she can read this. Maan asked what is she writing. First geet denied but then told him that she is writing about those days in farm house when he left her. Maan recalled the moment how depressed he was. He couldn't able to take how his geet was behaving like a stranger with him. so he decided to leave but geet's memories were haunting him and making it more tough to leave . waiting for next dear

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  5. nice update ,
    maan bck to home nd saw his mishty no where to seen.
    finally he spot both of them sitting in garden where mansi playing n geet lost in writing something making maan frown thinking may she is getting stressed again.
    he come to her nd broke her trance nd took mansi in his arms who get elated to see her dada come bck.
    geet told maan abouut the journal writing where she write their moments n save them.
    maan understnd her knowing she want to save all their memories in case she lost her memory again.
    maan lost in the past memory where he left them n drively rashly towards airport ..
    how much angry n helpless he felt at that time.
    firstly his love dont remember anything n now her words hurt him more nd secondly to apart from his daughter breake his heart in million pieces.
    he dont know what to do.he want to hate geet for making him helpless bt its only her who can soothe his heart.
    her single glance make his heart calm.

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  6. Lovely update...Maan saw his misty and his baby in the lawn when he returned back from office and he frowned seeing geet busy writing something and stressing herself....geet told about her writings in journal and not ready to show to maan ...maan got lost and went back to his memory when geet asked him about the night in farm house and he remembered how harshly he was driving to airport to leave the country permanently leaving his geet and his baby ...every moment geets memories and her antics were haunting him continuously and how she broke his heart by telling him that she wont remember him and his love ...
    IF ID: SRIIF

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  7. so geet is feeling insecured........it happens........

    awesome update...

    loved it very much...

    thank u very much fr d lovely update...

    eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

    continue soon plz...

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  8. Part 61- terrific update! excellently written! Maan is back! Geet writing in her diary! Maan curious! she doesn't want him 2 read it! Maaneet argue! Maan recalls the past n when he left her at the FH! He was sad as she didn't remember him! she is his everything! update soon, khwaishfan IF

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  9. read all the parts. awesome parts and waiting for next. my IF id is CHERUKURI9

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  10. Woww. Read all parts first thank you for updating likes this. Love all parts..mithu became more naughty n maan loving her two princess ���� he pampering her them Geet to loving it n some time blushing Geet to came n meera n rest no leave to tease her. Slowly slwoly she making her new memories as maan said. N little cute Geet m sadu maan reaaly adorable..ove ice cream parlour scene. Mithub������

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  11. poor geet.. wanting to capture every memory of her in the dairy .. how insecure she have become
    again fearing of losing her memory..
    why maan is so angry on geet in the past..

    Continue soon

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  12. Maan is back to office
    But geet ko kahi nahi dekh kar he is searching and calling her loudly
    Tabhiwo unhe garden mai dekhta hai jaha Maansi khel rahi hai aur geet khuck likhne mai busy hai
    Maansi is soo happy jab wo apne Papa ko dekhti hai iss se pehle ki Maansi maan tak pahuche maan usse aage badh kar godd mai uttha leta hai aur geet se puchta hai ki wo phir stress le rahi hai but geet usse kehti hai ki ye Kaam usse khudh karna hai wo apna sab khuch diary mai likh rahi taki phir wo kabhi apni memories ko bhul jaaye tou wo diary padh kar unhe yaad kar sake
    Beautifully written
    Loved it๐Ÿ˜˜

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  13. Geet is writing a dairy abt her past or abt her feelings
    she was Maan's shadow always following him but now she is blank
    so both r in pain but past was beautiful n they hv a present to cherish
    Maan will makes sure to hold on tight this time

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  14. Maansi so cute with all her antics Maaneet spending time with each other. Maan promising Geet for making new memories was lovely. GEET was a devil in childhood. Loved dadu and Geet bonding

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  15. Geet started to write :v
    Phir se vul gaya to :P lol

    IF ...RIDDHIMA...

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  16. excellent update... maan came back from office and didn't find geet in the mansion. he finally found her in the garden along with mansi... geet is writing a dairy so that she will not forget her life... in the past maan left geet hearing her words which hurt him very much... waiting to know what happened after maan left the farm house...

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  17. Wonderful update!!Mansi is so sweet and became so naughty too...Geet is again writing the diary....Maaneet spending their time with Mansi is so beautiful...In Maan is hurt by Geet's words and he left her in past.....Loved it so much...

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  18. Awesome part..
    Maan ko pata hai uski geet angry hai isiliya toh kanhi mili nahi and dono maan beti lawn ma time spend kar rahe hai.. Maan geet ko kuch write karta dekha tense hai kanhi wo stress na ho jaye par geet ki insecurities usa diary write karna sahi laga hai.. Cuttie mansi apne world ma busy hai..
    Geet farmhouse time incident write kia hai diary ma kaisa maan usa aur mansi ko hamesa ka liya choad ka ja raha tha apne pain ma kyun ki geet ki indifference usa bardasht nahi hua jo hames uska life ma imp thi wo strangely behave kar rahi thi memory loss ka baad..
    Waiting for next part..

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  19. Part 61 – present– so geet was writing down all events of her current life which she totally forgotten about her past. I think this will help her to imagine her earlier life. I like their present as both were trying to settle in this situation.
    Past – he went from FH and driving to airport to leave them & all this as he could not bear their distances from him. He recalled how she was his shadow when he came to jungle camp she too came behind him. And now she just don’t remind her love, their love. He was really hurt that time.
    Waiting for more to unfold from past.

    If - Madhuri53

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  20. crazycutee
    superb update
    geet is angry on maan for not attenting family time
    and maan easly manofy her

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  21. WOW!! fantastic part dear....loved it

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