Wednesday 22 March 2017

Project-You are my Habit (Aadat hai Tu Meri)- Part 9





You are my Habit 
(Aadat hai Tu Meri)




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CHAPTER 9




Maan comes and stands in front of her, still rubbing her forehead from where to start whilst she clutched hard the sides of her suit in fists... fearing from his any action.




"I am sorry." she shocked with his sudden advance that has frozen her for a moment and next second he did something totally unexpected when he embraced her and whisper "I am sorry" one again in her ear. She knew the meaning of this three words as he taught her a few days back.


"Yaar, see neither I am a girl, nor had a sister and there is no doubt that I am a jerk and didn't know... how a girl feels... I am just... You know me naa... I do first then think" but she cut him in mid.



"Why... now?"



"Actually, Mom has called me and give me an earful scolding to make me come back to the right path." he was struggling whilst Geet face falls down... "oh he is here because Mumma asked him" again the same history repeated, his blabbering isn't reaching to her brain and them she just left abruptly from there with any more confrontation and Maan left stunned with her action.




"Yaar I am saying sorry, please don't be angry now... please... please." he followed her in the kitchen with a puppy like expressions. He can't afford to waste this chance once again or else she will walk out on the balcony, after all, it is her all time favorite hide out.




"I am not angry Maan," she said but her voice cold like ice poured on Maan's head. 





"Will you give me food then? I didn't have anything but noodles from last 4 days." he tried to charm her but didn't know that nothing is working on her and her wound of loneliness was so deep that she doesn't want to share with him anymore.



She just nodded and start to do preparation for their dinner. Maan felt odd but think to cheer her up after dinner because poor girl is still in shock with his wired behavior.



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From this point, he wants to be her friend and know, she also wants and need same, but throwing tantrum on him.



"Maan you hurt her so, better bear her all tantrums. why did you make me so kind Krishna Ji," he thought with a frown.



After dinner, Maan tried a lot to start a conversation with her but got a reply in monosyllabic only...



"Please talk to me my love here, I am chatting from hours alone like a fool..." Maan complained very cutely.




Gee sighed "I don't want to spoil my habits Maan. You come one day and demand to talk with you then next day you left me like my existence doesn't mean anything to you... I am a mere human Maan and stop expecting anything from you" 

she paused for a moment then spoke in deep low voice "I want to be alone Maan like always." she turned her back to him and pretended to sleep after giving him a sleepless night for sure.


"I am sorry... maaf kardo abb" Maan said but doesn't receive any reply.


He could feel the longing in her statement and her words rang in his ears for hours. Yes, she stayed whole day all alone in between these 4 walls. and there is no friend or family, in fact, he is the only one for her in this city and he too left her. The worst is that he didn't even say hello to her in last 4 days. He felt terrible after thinking her condition for being alone and isolated.


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More day passed there is little change in him after this incident. He talked with Geet and eat dinner with her without a miss, but couldn't able to avoid his club and parties with his group. This is a part of him and can't be avoided.


"Now, what should I have to do exactly to get your forgiveness?"



Geet ignored him like before and continued her work.



"See, is this going to work?" Geet turned and find Maan is standing there in a funny pose like a clown. She suppressed her smile and turn back to prepare lunch for both of them.



"Okay, today I will cook food for us," he said and push her out of the kitchen and worn the apron like a great chef. Geet rolled her eye and just give a quick pray for her kitchen's safety from this monster's activities. 




One hour passed and she wondered, what is Maan doing exactly... no sound from the kitchen. She peeps inside and jumped out of skin when she found flour, spices even milk scattered around the slab whilst Maan is struggling with roties (round Indian bread) to give it the right shape. He messed himself too and a palak leaf is tugging on his ear and a turmeric print of palm is adoring her beloved apron.


 



She fumed to see his so called help and marched inside.



"Leave it... what had you done? Now I have to do clean this mess." she murmured and snatched spatula from him with a glare and Maan being an opportunist just caged her in his embrace. 



"Did you forgive me?" he asked with smirk and Geet turned face in annoyance.



"(You didn't.. ok I will prepare tomorrow's lunch as well. Umm, where is the wok ...Krishna Ji," He pretended to search utensils around.



"No never... you shall never step into my kitchen ever." she warned with a pointed spatula to him in warning.




"So, am I forgiven?"



"Yes, I had forgiven you, now will you please leave." she scanned the kitchen with pity face and forget her position.


"Belive me Food is good)"


She gave him a mocked glare.


But Maan made bite and placed in her mouth n she screamed


"Oh my god! Yuck...  is this even qualifies to pronounce as food?" and Maan laughed his head out.



"And this is the punishment to show antics to The Msk," he said and offered her one more bite which she snapped in anger and mumbled something.

"Huh... The Msk... My Foot."



"Okay, no need to boil in anger. I will take you outside for dinner and will help you in cleaning too."




"Help and you... !!! Whatever you have done... is enough for a lifetime and I don't want to go anywhere." but Maan didn't take her protest and after checking stove in the kitchen, he lifted in his arms and dropped her in washroom straight and locked her inside...





"Get ready in 15 minutes Geet or else will take you in whatever condition... I will find you" she heard his shouting n fumed to see his stubbornness with her always.
 



"You are shameless n incorrigible." she told him all agitated with his Stubborn demands.




"Tarif ke liye shukriya bageum...(Thanks, for the compliment my wife,) now please take little bit pain and sit onto the bike," he said dramatically and poor Geet wasn't able to hold herself back and whacked him on his back.




"O god, you are beating your husband in the street. What will this world think?" and he started the bike to have lunch with his wife.




He started to take her out for a small outing but still, the tension between his group and wife didn't seem to bug at all and which he decided to solve it as soon as possible.



He took her to a south Indian restaurant, where she relished the food every time he took her here and both had A 'paper masala dosa' with ice cream in the end.



"I know... I made mistake and asked sorry always, but I didn't do them intentionally and today I promised to you that I shall fight with you or argue with you, but will nerve stop talking and leave alone" he said when they both are taking little bit walk after dinner in the beautiful hotel garden.




"You also promise me."



"What?" Geet asked in confusion.




"You wouldn't throw tantrums on me so many days... Yaar bhout bhaav khati hu tum," he said and run to save his life whilst Geet run behind him to catch him. 




Their relation turned little unique in all sense coz both are innocent and good at heart but just destiny put them in a situation which gave them hard time to cope up with it.



Author clarification


Human is bound to do mistakes, but to accept and rectify it...  is also a big thing. If Maan had reacted here than once again he is in a situation but as soon as someone knocks some sense into him.. he is already on his knees to ask her forgiveness. He was a little bit influenced too by Nisha.. who made this a big matter also. Sometimes we only see one side of the coin only for me... no mistakes are so big to not to forgiven especially when they hadn't done intentionally. 



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20 comments:

  1. hey again am first lovely update good to see maan behavior toward geet waiting for next part

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  2. hello! thanks 4 da entertaining update! superbly written! Maan reveals he spoke to his mom! Geet miffed! Geet's anger justified! she igonires Maan! her naser reveals her pain! Maan realises hw lonely she was in those days! she avoids him! Maan resorts 2 cooking! he makes a mess thereby forcing Geet 2 forgive him! Maan takes her out 4 lunch! Maan teases her! he promises never to stop talking to her or leave her alone! they r getting used 2 each other! update asap! khwaishfan IF

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  3. Nice update dear Mann asked sorry to Geet but she is not ready to forgive as she done want to left alone again but Mann make all kind of activitive ask forgiveness and takes her to hotel

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  4. Part 9 – she was sad to know that he asked sorry b’coss his mom told him. Liked how he pacified her and made her to forgive him….by making promise to cook for more days. Lol. He took her out for food. Liked their masti at the end. Hope soon he will find a way to patch up bet her & his friends.

    IF ID - Madhuri53

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  5. Amazing update
    I loved maan's innocence jab he spilled the beans ki usski mom ne usse realized Karaya hai ki what mistake he has done
    Loved maan's manayofying geet
    Beautifully written
    Loved it

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  6. I'm so glad atleast maan managed to shift geet mood ....
    but geet was still hurt ..why maan won't realize this himself that he did mistake??? that hurt geet as well.
    but I loved how maan mad sheet happy.

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  7. Geet's wounds run deep...Before marriage and after that due to her loss in life. Feel so deeply for her. Happy to see Maan realising his mistake after getting scolded by his mum. And it took a while for everything to sink in. Only after Geet told him a little bit of what she feels did he realise how much isolated and alone she is as she has no one else. So happy to see them back on friendship mode. I guess Maan is too influenced by his friends. But its about time he has to take responsibility for his marriage and Geet. That would mean cutting back on his partying and friends. I hope he does that soon enough. Should Geet just go back to Maan's mum & stay with her? Maybe continue her education & make a name for herself? So so excited to read what would happen next yaar. Loving this story so much:):):)

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  8. first I was angry at maan behaviours but what he did later really made me like him so much.
    He is not someone to back of from his responsibility and he actually said
    sorry to her the moment he realise his mistake ...


    I enjoyed the conversation between Maaneet their roothna maana and all
    ohh must say geet is the epitome of patience, wisdom and love
    i just love her ....
    I admire how you penned down geet's hesitance to accept the bitter
    moments and totally not expecting maan to get so involved in this and
    try to shorted out their issues uufff This maan keeps on surprising
    me these days ....
    hmm i can see they both have gotten to the friendship phase and
    The Promise no matter what we will naver stop talking wid ewac other aww so cute
    both are innocent and soo dorable :) ...........

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  9. thanks for the realpy .. glad that u like my comment :) ......

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  10. plss update the next part sooon watinggg

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  11. Nice update. If id is Cherukuri9.

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  12. SUPERB UPDATE
    MAAN ASKED SORRY TO GEET AND SHE ASK HIM WHY NOW AND CAMEKOW HIS IS ASKING SORRY TO HER BEC OF HIS MOTHER AND U R RIGHT MISTAKES NOT BIG THATS WHY GEET FORGIVE HIM

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  13. nice ud
    maan said sorry to geet but she was so hurt bz he left hr whole 4days but at last maan succeed in his mission and geet left hr anger
    both went out fr dinner and their relation turning hud

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  14. Good decision on Maan' part. Love this chapter

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  15. Awesome and beautiful part..
    Maan geet ko sorry bolta hai par geet maan ka 4days ki behaviour sa bahut hurt hai wo sunti nahi aur apne pain bolti hai maan ko geet ka pain samjha ata hai aur wo geet ka picha hi pada hai maffi magna ko.. Geet sad feel karti hai ya jan kar ki maan mom ki baat par sorry bolna aya hai..
    Maan geet sa maffi pane ko launch banata hai par kitchen ka halatt bigad leta hai and sorry pane ko kitchen and cook karna ki baat par blackmail karta hai aur geet usa forgive kar deta hai..
    Maan geet ko promise karta hai ki wo aisa behave nahi karega..
    Maaneet moments are sweet and lovely..
    Waiting for next part..

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  16. Superbbb update...
    Maaneet moments beautiful....
    Maan said sorry to geet....
    And promised her in last tooo.....

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  17. Lovely update!!!Loved Maaneet lovely moments....maan said sorry to Geet but she is so much hurt by his behaviour....Loved the way Maan is manofying his wife is so lovely...Maan takes her outside for lunch.....Maan promised her that he will never stop talking and leave alone...Loved it so much....

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  18. Actually Loved this part
    haye innocent minds making up for their mistakes
    grt part

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  19. superb update ..
    this time maan have tough time to apologise geet ..
    well all the time u cant be forgiven easily ..
    nd geet's situation is not easy ,coz everytime they get normal n behave civily something happened nd it was always maan who become so impulsive nd get rude to geet .
    its not easy for her to always hide her emotions nd behave like nothing happened ..
    bt i also maan's ways to apologise nd even ready to cook ..
    however it spread mess all over the kitchen ..
    thnkfully maan understnd his mistake nd promised never stop talking with her whatever the situation be ..
    atleast thats a grt thing after that fight ..

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  20. Nice update dear
    Liked it!!
    Maan apologised to geet and was sorry for his demeanor but Geet was miffed with his continues chanting of sorry after his gestures of hurting her. With time maan realised that it was tough for Geet to be aloof and had no one to share her gloominess too. His behavior made atmosphere light between them and vowed that he will never make her feel aloof.

    IF name: anu5

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