Monday 20 March 2017

Project- You are my Habit (Aadat hai Tu Meri)- Part 8



You are my Habit 
(Aadat hai Tu Meri)
CHAPTER 8








Other side Maan is feeling terribly confused, angered and sad too. He doesn't know, how is he going to cope up with a girl, who is 360 opposite to him in everything.


Neelam too didn't call at all as she was on an official foreign trip and didn't get time to call to Geet and Maan.


Today is the fourth day of their cold war and this is when Maan received a call from his mom.


"Maan! How are you, my son? How is my shona Geet?" Neelam asked with affection.


"All is as same as mom and how are you? Missing you so much" but Maan tone gave up his mantle status in front of the lady, who keep him in her womb for 9 months.


"Is there something, you want to Tell me Maan? why are you sounding dull bacha? Geet... is she fine... call her Maan... I want to talk to her." Neelam felt restless with the silence from another side.


"Mom vo... I don't wanna talk about her.. I never have seen someone with such disgusting thought" Maan said with pure angry tone.






"Maan..." Neelam said angrily... "Is this way to talk about your wife? This is what I teach you?"


"Then what should I do mom.. aarti karu uski... she literally had broken my group and you can't even imagine, what has she done? Damn, she doubted on Armaan n Rahul... I mean how could she? They are my chuddy buddy yaar... how... I don't know Mumma... How to explain... I couldn't able to meet eye with Armaan anymore... she denied their entry in the apartment... how the hell she did something like that mom, just call her back mom... I can't even able to breathe with her under the same roof... I hate her mom... hate her so much" he poured his all frustration finally in front of his mom, who isn't only his mentor, but a first friend too.


"What an irony Maan?" She paused for a second to control her nerve to not to shout at him for his stupid behavior, but Maan frowned with his mother reaction.


 "You cared for your friends and you cared for your friendship too, but not your wife... for god sake Maan if they are your friends then who is she Maan? A stranger or just responsibility which your mom forced to you... who is she Maan?" Neelam paused for a moment.

"Did you ask her if someone said something or troubled her? Did you ask her about her behavior? What if someone is troubling her behind you back and her behavior is just her consciousness... with whom she share her pain and fear Maan... have you thought in this direction ever".


"Mom.. you are unnecessarily blaming my buddies?" He winched stubbornly.



"No.. I am not... I am just trying to show you the mirror of reality and what had she done wrong? If she was conscious for her safety? Who will take responsibility if her doubts turn out to be true even one percent... just answer me Maan... is your anger able to give her back the lost respect again."



"Mom.. she knows them."



"Yes, she just barely knows them so, she feels danger in the presence of two merely known men and banned their entry into the apartment because her husband was not there to save her from any unexpected danger... How is this all to you sound Maan?"


"She is a girl Maan and she had the ability to see, what you can't and for any girl, safety is more important compare to anyone so called self-respect."

 "And if your buddies are really a gentleman than they themselves didn't like to invade any woman privacy in her husband absence."


"I.. I.. mom"


"I am really feeling ashamed that I failed to teach you about girl's respect and respect their privacy. She did absolutely right whatever she felt opt for her safety and you can't snatch this right from her just at the name of your so called friendship now if you have slight shame in you then go and ask sorry to her... console her that she didn't do anything wrong... I know... how it feels when you are in such embarrassing situation"


Neelam hanged up the call in anger whilst Maan is sitting on the bench stunned with his mom giant lecture on Women Safety and Self-respect.


"How could she expect me to know all this? Neither I have a sister, nor a girlfriend... wife is nothing, but an unexpected event of my life...  how could I know... what insecurity girls had in their heads" Maan thought with a pout but he felt angry on Nisha. She too is a girl... but she didn't take any initiative to correct me. He sighed... this is his responsibility to look after his wife... not theirs.


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He entered in their apartment at the time of evening after 4 days or else he chose to come at late night just for sleeping.



Geet frowned to see him so earlier and feel a somersault of fear in her belly. Did he come with some purpose? Is he going to throw her out at this time? So many negative thoughts hovered in her brain in just span of 60 seconds.




Maan comes and stands in front of her, still rubbing her forehead from where to start whilst she clutched hard the sides of her suit in fists... fearing from his any action.




"I am sorry." she shocked with his sudden advance that has frozen her for a moment and next second he did something totally unexpected when he embraced her and whisper "I am sorry" one again in her ear. She knew the meaning of this three words as he taught her a few days back.



 



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Thursday 16 March 2017

Project- You are my Habit (Aadat Hai Tu Meri)- Part 7



You are my Habit 
(Aadat Hai Tu Meri)


@Kiran Di- Yes, I made few changes and correct all spelling mistake and most important, I removed all the Hindi Dialogues from the story, but you tell me which one was better, this one or previous version.



CHAPTER 7


A month passed his group is used to visit the apartment in his presence for group studies and Geet quietly left on the balcony for some hours as she still didn't feel good around his high headed friends excluding Adi.



"Now, What is this?" Maan asked and clenched his jaw tight.



"It's almond milk... why?? Doesn't look like one?"Geet peeps inside the glass and looked at Maan again in confusion



Maan rolled his eyes and crushed himself to even think of arguing with her... 
"Oh I am so obliged Geet that you informed me something so obvious, but please just for my general knowledge, can you tell me, why you keep it here?" Maan pointed toward his study table.



This time Geet slapped her forehead and murmured something another side Maan felt like pull his hair out first she doesn't understand his sarcasm and now she is busy in self-talking, but ignoring her antics he tapped her shoulder with questioning gaze.


"See Krishna! He doesn't know anything, offoo!! almond milk is so good for Kids, especially who had exams on their head" Geet told him very interestingly... Maan was like "please god save me from her".








"Kid???" He spoke between of his gritted teeth.


Geet bite her tongue slightly then nodded in yes then no... again yes.. whilst Maan was taking steady steps toward her and pressed her between his body and bedroom back wall.


"So, you think me as a toddler... didn't you?" Maan hissed in an inaudible voice.



Geet was so nervous to register his words in the proximity of his male body whilst Maan was unknown to their proximity and pressed himself more into her dedicated frame and don't know why but tears beamed in Geet eyes? The vulnerability of her female heart made her pushed Maan from her and run into the washroom.


Oblivious to all this Maan just laughed aloud behind her back and shouted "Omg, I never knew that a witch could also get scared, just look at your face Geet, it turns white... Ohh my god" he laughed and laughed.. unknown to the condition of Geet, whose tears dropping with his every stroke of laughing.



She cried till the time she feels calm and composed because it's hard to see yourself useless in your partner eyes and this is what Geet's ears feel due to his laugh "you are always just a laughing stroke for him... Geet" She quietly wiped her face and changed into the nightie and get ready for bed.



She saw him many times laughing over her questions, sometimes it's for her lack of knowledge, but she every time veiled her hurt very well and to get rid of those incidents with a small smile.. he didn't has any idea about her hurt because of his immature behavior.



Maan gulped down the milk later and don't give much attention to Geet.. who just comes out from the washroom and laid on their bad as he had his own projects and commitments and he had too prepared for upcoming semester too.


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One more month passed and Maan still in the role of carefree bachelor boy... whose life start from institute and end at some party or club.



One day Maan was not returned back from institute but his friend Armaan and Rahul paid a visit to his apartment as their plan of one more group study. This is never a question for them if Maan is at home or they could come here anytime and neighbors too gave them key without any inquiry but now situation is different... Geet is always in the home.


Geet smiled as bell finally ringed and she wiped her palms with apron and move to open the door for Maan.


But she surprised to see Armaan n Rahul at the door instead of Maan. She felt uneasy to let them allow inside in the absence of Maan but her straight denial can hurt them and She is still standing in their way and fiddling with the corner of Her scarf to think a way to tell them about her fear.



"He isn't at home" she tried to sound normal as much as she could.



"okay, now move please he is on the way" Rahul gave her a look of whatever.



"No.. I mean... means.. vo... I am all alone"







Her words rubbed Armaan's self-respect, next moment he pulls Rahul with him and left the building, leaving Geet behind bewailed with their sudden change of action.



Geet closed the door and sat on the couch, all fearing for Maan reaction for this incident. Her girly instinct didn't allow her to let two men enter in her apartment when she is alone but they are the old friends of Maan too which made her guilty for her action.




After half an hour Maan entered unknown the tension between his friends and wife.



"Lunch is ready Maan," she said meekly, Maan stopped for a second after hearing her dull voice but shrugged it as his over thinking only.



"Hmm... Armaan and Rahul were going to visit home, but Don't know where they are?" Maan asked casually and Geet stumbled on her place... But before she could utter a word, Door opened with a bang to their apartment.





"Nisha? ?" Maan asked surprise.


"Yes. Mr. Kurana!!! Nisha... who was your friend until today morning... remember? ?" She snapped.



"Have you turned mad or did you bang your head somewhere?" Maan said and didn't pay her any more attention to think, this is her usual drama to gain his attention like always.





"I don't believe it.. how could be you so cool after... what your wife did?" Maan turned with confused.


"Mean??"



"Ask from your so called wife.. how she insulated Armaan n Rahul? And yes... this friendship over Maan... we couldn't bear her anymore" Nisha left with the same speed and Maan turned angrily toward Geet.


"Geet.. spit out" he frustrated... "Tell me what happened?".





" Armaan and Rahul were here, but you weren't at home and I was all alone then how could I allow them inside. I mean... I" she stammered hard and eyes sting.




"Today, You have hurt me a lot" he left the room angrily and Geet had fallen down on her knees... crying her eyes out.. she doesn't want all this drama but how could she play her safety.. no... her head is bursting out with shame, anger n guilty... all mixed feelings hovered on her.



The evening turned into the dark night, but Maan didn't come back and Geet is still sitting in the same posture as cuddle as a ball.


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Maan left straight to meet Armaan and Rahul to the Nisha's apartment as he knew his gang second favorite place is Nisha's apartment only.



He somehow sorted out with his friends and come back at late night only but didn't eat anything or talked with Geet at all.



Three days passed like this only, but no conversation took place between them and he stopped eating at home too but in all this, he didn't see the condition of Geet. She turned silent completely, already she had no one here as her own and now Maan too turned his back to her... no one is here to even ask just for formality if she ate or not or if she needs anything or even if she wants to share something, but no one is here to share her pain and Dilemma.

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Tuesday 14 March 2017

Project- You are my Habit (Aadat Hai Tu Meri)-Part 6




                                    You are my Habit 
(Aadat Hai Tu Meri)


Author Notes

Thanks for all the comments and Likes, Now you can find my blog by google Search too, Just try to search "Mitu Pen World stories Blog" with this line you can add my story name too for more convenience for you. My blog name is "Love for Fiction" and you can find it on the first page of google Search.


CHAPTER 6






Geet frowned to see when he stopped the bike at an isolated area and at the name of human presence, there was just one small tea shop with few folding cots under a shed.


"What is this Place Maan?" before she complete it



"You didn't have anything there so, I thought ahh this is famous tea and bread butter stall of this city and you know that all the college students at least visited this place for once in their semester, but you know why?" both settled on the one cot comfortably after removing their footwear.



"Actually... they keep this stall open whole night and after study whenever I or anyone feel starve even in midnights too then we visit here for the awesome snacks" he smiled sheepishly.




Suddenly the loud thunderstorm caught their attention and with this heavy downpour started. 







There is little hustle- bustle as tea stall owner started to move back little under the tent to save from this heavy downpour and there is only Maan n Geet at the name of the customer and they too had no hurry.



"
What would you like to have Bhai?" a boy age of 18 comes there in his loose fitting vest and lose knicker...




"2 tea.. n 4 pieces of bread butter, but" before Maan said the boy complete it.




"Don't worry Bhai, toast will hard like always and  I will not forget to add ginger, but what madam like to have?"




"For now it's enough..." Maan stretched his leg and sat comfortably as he didn't think that this rain will allow them to leave from here soon and finally see the smile on Geet face made her relaxed.



She is collecting drops in her palm like a child and letting her feet wet with Rimjim of rain.



"Are you happy now?" Maan asked breaking the ice between them.



"Umm.." Geet didn't turn, neither replied but give him an acknowledgment nod.


"Ok... please forgive me Geet... umm I know you are feeling bad and you should feel bad, but I was angry and my assignment.. marks..." he didn't know... how to make her understand.



I am not a fool Maan as you thought about me or maybe I didn't know ur language, nor your ways of living, but I am also human and understand feelings" Geet turned once again back to see in the infinity.
"






"Can we finish this bricking here only with this hot tea and bread toast?" Maan offered the plate to her with a hope in his eyes.



"Hmm.." Geet smiled little to see his puppy look and took mud teapot in her one hand and a buttered toast in other one and cherished like this is the tastiest meal in the world.



Well, right now it is as she isn't just hungry but famished and this heavy downpour doubled the taste of masala tea and mouth watering buttered toast.



"I loved rain, you know the sound of rain drop felt like that nature is singing and celebrating in happiness... Do you like rain Maan? " Geet spoke in a trance and found Maan is leaning on her shoulder from behind and his chin is resting on her shoulder as he is busy in lazily munching his toast.




"Umm.. didn't get much time for thinking all this... first studies than business... have to help mom as well." he said lazily.



"I know and understand too that you are not happy with our marriage, but I will never come in between your success and wishes," Geet said but didn't get any reply from Maan.




Maan didn't know what to say in reality, he can't give her... what their relation demanded from him... nor he wants to hurt her again when he knew... there is no way for both of them. Nor he can accept their marriage, neither leave her or divorced her. There is entangled with each other very badly and he knew... both is going to suffer... gap or contrast of their personalities would let them become one ever.




"Why did you not complete your studies?" Maan asked out of blue.





"My father's health was not in good conditions from yrs and he has no one except me, So I left school in mid and start to look after home and fields with my father, but he wants me to studies and I denied as he was really seriously ill... now see how did he leave me alone to live this life.. didn't even think how will I live without him alone in this world." her voice comes out like a whisper and a lump formed at the bottom of her throat.




"I too missed my Dad... I missed the feel of security around him" Maan whispered in trance... Geet didn't understand his words but her heart able to relate to the amount of pain in his voice.. she knew... he is talking about his father as her mind caught Dad word from his whole stance.



Maan laughed slightly a painful laugh "Mom always told me that Dad is here still between us and I shouldn't miss him and then she used to cry for Dad in the room" he chuckled slightly after thinking, how his mom always failed in consoling him.




"Man.. you are a dangerous girl, just see what have you done to me, do I have an image or not" he commented playfully after removing wetness from the corner of the eye.





Don't know from where... Geet got guts but she hugged him tightly and kept her head on his check whilst encircled her arms around his waist... Maan too didn't protest and took her in his half-embrace and both watched the rain in silence... for an hour.



Maan opened hs eyes when he felt some moment around him... and found a young boy is standing next to them... his grip had gotten tight around Geet in sense of responsibility... their conflict is behind the 4 walls of their home... for outside world she is his wife and he is responsible for her security like gentleman.



Maan glared at the small boy, who fumbled 
"Bhai... I was just covering you both with a blanket". Maan instantly calms down with his proper reason and signaled him to leave them alone whilst Geet is still sleeping in his arms peacefully and Maan also didn't wake up her.



This outing took a massive change in their relation at least... they tried to be friendly with each other... instead of fighting or planning to get rid of another one. There is an unspoken agreement between them and Maan too felt her presence turned out quite profitable for him. He doesn't have to leave empty stomach in morning... nor he had to think about making his lunch after a tired day in institute whilst other side Geet tried to not to bother him with her presence but this isn't much matter to him... the main thing he felt that he didn't has to come inside a dark apartment daily. She filled his home with her presence and he never felt alone and sad after she had started to live with him.. he felt like... he is in km and someone is there to look after him. He was also not less...


After today, he always makes sure that as a husband, he fulfilled all his duties sincerely like Geet did and he is inspired by her in so many ways moreover her patients the and presence of mind started to attract him.


Their relation is unique and crossed all the protocol of the society. There is no typical husband and wife drama but both loved to pull each other leg and taunt to each other. Any experienced person could say from their fights that they had fallen in love but they are far away to recognize their newly found love.


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