Wednesday 22 March 2017

Project-You are my Habit (Aadat hai Tu Meri)- Part 9





You are my Habit 
(Aadat hai Tu Meri)




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CHAPTER 9




Maan comes and stands in front of her, still rubbing her forehead from where to start whilst she clutched hard the sides of her suit in fists... fearing from his any action.




"I am sorry." she shocked with his sudden advance that has frozen her for a moment and next second he did something totally unexpected when he embraced her and whisper "I am sorry" one again in her ear. She knew the meaning of this three words as he taught her a few days back.


"Yaar, see neither I am a girl, nor had a sister and there is no doubt that I am a jerk and didn't know... how a girl feels... I am just... You know me naa... I do first then think" but she cut him in mid.



"Why... now?"



"Actually, Mom has called me and give me an earful scolding to make me come back to the right path." he was struggling whilst Geet face falls down... "oh he is here because Mumma asked him" again the same history repeated, his blabbering isn't reaching to her brain and them she just left abruptly from there with any more confrontation and Maan left stunned with her action.




"Yaar I am saying sorry, please don't be angry now... please... please." he followed her in the kitchen with a puppy like expressions. He can't afford to waste this chance once again or else she will walk out on the balcony, after all, it is her all time favorite hide out.




"I am not angry Maan," she said but her voice cold like ice poured on Maan's head. 





"Will you give me food then? I didn't have anything but noodles from last 4 days." he tried to charm her but didn't know that nothing is working on her and her wound of loneliness was so deep that she doesn't want to share with him anymore.



She just nodded and start to do preparation for their dinner. Maan felt odd but think to cheer her up after dinner because poor girl is still in shock with his wired behavior.



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From this point, he wants to be her friend and know, she also wants and need same, but throwing tantrum on him.



"Maan you hurt her so, better bear her all tantrums. why did you make me so kind Krishna Ji," he thought with a frown.



After dinner, Maan tried a lot to start a conversation with her but got a reply in monosyllabic only...



"Please talk to me my love here, I am chatting from hours alone like a fool..." Maan complained very cutely.




Gee sighed "I don't want to spoil my habits Maan. You come one day and demand to talk with you then next day you left me like my existence doesn't mean anything to you... I am a mere human Maan and stop expecting anything from you" 

she paused for a moment then spoke in deep low voice "I want to be alone Maan like always." she turned her back to him and pretended to sleep after giving him a sleepless night for sure.


"I am sorry... maaf kardo abb" Maan said but doesn't receive any reply.


He could feel the longing in her statement and her words rang in his ears for hours. Yes, she stayed whole day all alone in between these 4 walls. and there is no friend or family, in fact, he is the only one for her in this city and he too left her. The worst is that he didn't even say hello to her in last 4 days. He felt terrible after thinking her condition for being alone and isolated.


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More day passed there is little change in him after this incident. He talked with Geet and eat dinner with her without a miss, but couldn't able to avoid his club and parties with his group. This is a part of him and can't be avoided.


"Now, what should I have to do exactly to get your forgiveness?"



Geet ignored him like before and continued her work.



"See, is this going to work?" Geet turned and find Maan is standing there in a funny pose like a clown. She suppressed her smile and turn back to prepare lunch for both of them.



"Okay, today I will cook food for us," he said and push her out of the kitchen and worn the apron like a great chef. Geet rolled her eye and just give a quick pray for her kitchen's safety from this monster's activities. 




One hour passed and she wondered, what is Maan doing exactly... no sound from the kitchen. She peeps inside and jumped out of skin when she found flour, spices even milk scattered around the slab whilst Maan is struggling with roties (round Indian bread) to give it the right shape. He messed himself too and a palak leaf is tugging on his ear and a turmeric print of palm is adoring her beloved apron.


 



She fumed to see his so called help and marched inside.



"Leave it... what had you done? Now I have to do clean this mess." she murmured and snatched spatula from him with a glare and Maan being an opportunist just caged her in his embrace. 



"Did you forgive me?" he asked with smirk and Geet turned face in annoyance.



"(You didn't.. ok I will prepare tomorrow's lunch as well. Umm, where is the wok ...Krishna Ji," He pretended to search utensils around.



"No never... you shall never step into my kitchen ever." she warned with a pointed spatula to him in warning.




"So, am I forgiven?"



"Yes, I had forgiven you, now will you please leave." she scanned the kitchen with pity face and forget her position.


"Belive me Food is good)"


She gave him a mocked glare.


But Maan made bite and placed in her mouth n she screamed


"Oh my god! Yuck...  is this even qualifies to pronounce as food?" and Maan laughed his head out.



"And this is the punishment to show antics to The Msk," he said and offered her one more bite which she snapped in anger and mumbled something.

"Huh... The Msk... My Foot."



"Okay, no need to boil in anger. I will take you outside for dinner and will help you in cleaning too."




"Help and you... !!! Whatever you have done... is enough for a lifetime and I don't want to go anywhere." but Maan didn't take her protest and after checking stove in the kitchen, he lifted in his arms and dropped her in washroom straight and locked her inside...





"Get ready in 15 minutes Geet or else will take you in whatever condition... I will find you" she heard his shouting n fumed to see his stubbornness with her always.
 



"You are shameless n incorrigible." she told him all agitated with his Stubborn demands.




"Tarif ke liye shukriya bageum...(Thanks, for the compliment my wife,) now please take little bit pain and sit onto the bike," he said dramatically and poor Geet wasn't able to hold herself back and whacked him on his back.




"O god, you are beating your husband in the street. What will this world think?" and he started the bike to have lunch with his wife.




He started to take her out for a small outing but still, the tension between his group and wife didn't seem to bug at all and which he decided to solve it as soon as possible.



He took her to a south Indian restaurant, where she relished the food every time he took her here and both had A 'paper masala dosa' with ice cream in the end.



"I know... I made mistake and asked sorry always, but I didn't do them intentionally and today I promised to you that I shall fight with you or argue with you, but will nerve stop talking and leave alone" he said when they both are taking little bit walk after dinner in the beautiful hotel garden.




"You also promise me."



"What?" Geet asked in confusion.




"You wouldn't throw tantrums on me so many days... Yaar bhout bhaav khati hu tum," he said and run to save his life whilst Geet run behind him to catch him. 




Their relation turned little unique in all sense coz both are innocent and good at heart but just destiny put them in a situation which gave them hard time to cope up with it.



Author clarification


Human is bound to do mistakes, but to accept and rectify it...  is also a big thing. If Maan had reacted here than once again he is in a situation but as soon as someone knocks some sense into him.. he is already on his knees to ask her forgiveness. He was a little bit influenced too by Nisha.. who made this a big matter also. Sometimes we only see one side of the coin only for me... no mistakes are so big to not to forgiven especially when they hadn't done intentionally. 



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Monday 20 March 2017

Project- You are my Habit (Aadat hai Tu Meri)- Part 8



You are my Habit 
(Aadat hai Tu Meri)
CHAPTER 8








Other side Maan is feeling terribly confused, angered and sad too. He doesn't know, how is he going to cope up with a girl, who is 360 opposite to him in everything.


Neelam too didn't call at all as she was on an official foreign trip and didn't get time to call to Geet and Maan.


Today is the fourth day of their cold war and this is when Maan received a call from his mom.


"Maan! How are you, my son? How is my shona Geet?" Neelam asked with affection.


"All is as same as mom and how are you? Missing you so much" but Maan tone gave up his mantle status in front of the lady, who keep him in her womb for 9 months.


"Is there something, you want to Tell me Maan? why are you sounding dull bacha? Geet... is she fine... call her Maan... I want to talk to her." Neelam felt restless with the silence from another side.


"Mom vo... I don't wanna talk about her.. I never have seen someone with such disgusting thought" Maan said with pure angry tone.






"Maan..." Neelam said angrily... "Is this way to talk about your wife? This is what I teach you?"


"Then what should I do mom.. aarti karu uski... she literally had broken my group and you can't even imagine, what has she done? Damn, she doubted on Armaan n Rahul... I mean how could she? They are my chuddy buddy yaar... how... I don't know Mumma... How to explain... I couldn't able to meet eye with Armaan anymore... she denied their entry in the apartment... how the hell she did something like that mom, just call her back mom... I can't even able to breathe with her under the same roof... I hate her mom... hate her so much" he poured his all frustration finally in front of his mom, who isn't only his mentor, but a first friend too.


"What an irony Maan?" She paused for a second to control her nerve to not to shout at him for his stupid behavior, but Maan frowned with his mother reaction.


 "You cared for your friends and you cared for your friendship too, but not your wife... for god sake Maan if they are your friends then who is she Maan? A stranger or just responsibility which your mom forced to you... who is she Maan?" Neelam paused for a moment.

"Did you ask her if someone said something or troubled her? Did you ask her about her behavior? What if someone is troubling her behind you back and her behavior is just her consciousness... with whom she share her pain and fear Maan... have you thought in this direction ever".


"Mom.. you are unnecessarily blaming my buddies?" He winched stubbornly.



"No.. I am not... I am just trying to show you the mirror of reality and what had she done wrong? If she was conscious for her safety? Who will take responsibility if her doubts turn out to be true even one percent... just answer me Maan... is your anger able to give her back the lost respect again."



"Mom.. she knows them."



"Yes, she just barely knows them so, she feels danger in the presence of two merely known men and banned their entry into the apartment because her husband was not there to save her from any unexpected danger... How is this all to you sound Maan?"


"She is a girl Maan and she had the ability to see, what you can't and for any girl, safety is more important compare to anyone so called self-respect."

 "And if your buddies are really a gentleman than they themselves didn't like to invade any woman privacy in her husband absence."


"I.. I.. mom"


"I am really feeling ashamed that I failed to teach you about girl's respect and respect their privacy. She did absolutely right whatever she felt opt for her safety and you can't snatch this right from her just at the name of your so called friendship now if you have slight shame in you then go and ask sorry to her... console her that she didn't do anything wrong... I know... how it feels when you are in such embarrassing situation"


Neelam hanged up the call in anger whilst Maan is sitting on the bench stunned with his mom giant lecture on Women Safety and Self-respect.


"How could she expect me to know all this? Neither I have a sister, nor a girlfriend... wife is nothing, but an unexpected event of my life...  how could I know... what insecurity girls had in their heads" Maan thought with a pout but he felt angry on Nisha. She too is a girl... but she didn't take any initiative to correct me. He sighed... this is his responsibility to look after his wife... not theirs.


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He entered in their apartment at the time of evening after 4 days or else he chose to come at late night just for sleeping.



Geet frowned to see him so earlier and feel a somersault of fear in her belly. Did he come with some purpose? Is he going to throw her out at this time? So many negative thoughts hovered in her brain in just span of 60 seconds.




Maan comes and stands in front of her, still rubbing her forehead from where to start whilst she clutched hard the sides of her suit in fists... fearing from his any action.




"I am sorry." she shocked with his sudden advance that has frozen her for a moment and next second he did something totally unexpected when he embraced her and whisper "I am sorry" one again in her ear. She knew the meaning of this three words as he taught her a few days back.



 



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Thursday 16 March 2017

Project- You are my Habit (Aadat Hai Tu Meri)- Part 7



You are my Habit 
(Aadat Hai Tu Meri)


@Kiran Di- Yes, I made few changes and correct all spelling mistake and most important, I removed all the Hindi Dialogues from the story, but you tell me which one was better, this one or previous version.



CHAPTER 7


A month passed his group is used to visit the apartment in his presence for group studies and Geet quietly left on the balcony for some hours as she still didn't feel good around his high headed friends excluding Adi.



"Now, What is this?" Maan asked and clenched his jaw tight.



"It's almond milk... why?? Doesn't look like one?"Geet peeps inside the glass and looked at Maan again in confusion



Maan rolled his eyes and crushed himself to even think of arguing with her... 
"Oh I am so obliged Geet that you informed me something so obvious, but please just for my general knowledge, can you tell me, why you keep it here?" Maan pointed toward his study table.



This time Geet slapped her forehead and murmured something another side Maan felt like pull his hair out first she doesn't understand his sarcasm and now she is busy in self-talking, but ignoring her antics he tapped her shoulder with questioning gaze.


"See Krishna! He doesn't know anything, offoo!! almond milk is so good for Kids, especially who had exams on their head" Geet told him very interestingly... Maan was like "please god save me from her".








"Kid???" He spoke between of his gritted teeth.


Geet bite her tongue slightly then nodded in yes then no... again yes.. whilst Maan was taking steady steps toward her and pressed her between his body and bedroom back wall.


"So, you think me as a toddler... didn't you?" Maan hissed in an inaudible voice.



Geet was so nervous to register his words in the proximity of his male body whilst Maan was unknown to their proximity and pressed himself more into her dedicated frame and don't know why but tears beamed in Geet eyes? The vulnerability of her female heart made her pushed Maan from her and run into the washroom.


Oblivious to all this Maan just laughed aloud behind her back and shouted "Omg, I never knew that a witch could also get scared, just look at your face Geet, it turns white... Ohh my god" he laughed and laughed.. unknown to the condition of Geet, whose tears dropping with his every stroke of laughing.



She cried till the time she feels calm and composed because it's hard to see yourself useless in your partner eyes and this is what Geet's ears feel due to his laugh "you are always just a laughing stroke for him... Geet" She quietly wiped her face and changed into the nightie and get ready for bed.



She saw him many times laughing over her questions, sometimes it's for her lack of knowledge, but she every time veiled her hurt very well and to get rid of those incidents with a small smile.. he didn't has any idea about her hurt because of his immature behavior.



Maan gulped down the milk later and don't give much attention to Geet.. who just comes out from the washroom and laid on their bad as he had his own projects and commitments and he had too prepared for upcoming semester too.


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One more month passed and Maan still in the role of carefree bachelor boy... whose life start from institute and end at some party or club.



One day Maan was not returned back from institute but his friend Armaan and Rahul paid a visit to his apartment as their plan of one more group study. This is never a question for them if Maan is at home or they could come here anytime and neighbors too gave them key without any inquiry but now situation is different... Geet is always in the home.


Geet smiled as bell finally ringed and she wiped her palms with apron and move to open the door for Maan.


But she surprised to see Armaan n Rahul at the door instead of Maan. She felt uneasy to let them allow inside in the absence of Maan but her straight denial can hurt them and She is still standing in their way and fiddling with the corner of Her scarf to think a way to tell them about her fear.



"He isn't at home" she tried to sound normal as much as she could.



"okay, now move please he is on the way" Rahul gave her a look of whatever.



"No.. I mean... means.. vo... I am all alone"







Her words rubbed Armaan's self-respect, next moment he pulls Rahul with him and left the building, leaving Geet behind bewailed with their sudden change of action.



Geet closed the door and sat on the couch, all fearing for Maan reaction for this incident. Her girly instinct didn't allow her to let two men enter in her apartment when she is alone but they are the old friends of Maan too which made her guilty for her action.




After half an hour Maan entered unknown the tension between his friends and wife.



"Lunch is ready Maan," she said meekly, Maan stopped for a second after hearing her dull voice but shrugged it as his over thinking only.



"Hmm... Armaan and Rahul were going to visit home, but Don't know where they are?" Maan asked casually and Geet stumbled on her place... But before she could utter a word, Door opened with a bang to their apartment.





"Nisha? ?" Maan asked surprise.


"Yes. Mr. Kurana!!! Nisha... who was your friend until today morning... remember? ?" She snapped.



"Have you turned mad or did you bang your head somewhere?" Maan said and didn't pay her any more attention to think, this is her usual drama to gain his attention like always.





"I don't believe it.. how could be you so cool after... what your wife did?" Maan turned with confused.


"Mean??"



"Ask from your so called wife.. how she insulated Armaan n Rahul? And yes... this friendship over Maan... we couldn't bear her anymore" Nisha left with the same speed and Maan turned angrily toward Geet.


"Geet.. spit out" he frustrated... "Tell me what happened?".





" Armaan and Rahul were here, but you weren't at home and I was all alone then how could I allow them inside. I mean... I" she stammered hard and eyes sting.




"Today, You have hurt me a lot" he left the room angrily and Geet had fallen down on her knees... crying her eyes out.. she doesn't want all this drama but how could she play her safety.. no... her head is bursting out with shame, anger n guilty... all mixed feelings hovered on her.



The evening turned into the dark night, but Maan didn't come back and Geet is still sitting in the same posture as cuddle as a ball.


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Maan left straight to meet Armaan and Rahul to the Nisha's apartment as he knew his gang second favorite place is Nisha's apartment only.



He somehow sorted out with his friends and come back at late night only but didn't eat anything or talked with Geet at all.



Three days passed like this only, but no conversation took place between them and he stopped eating at home too but in all this, he didn't see the condition of Geet. She turned silent completely, already she had no one here as her own and now Maan too turned his back to her... no one is here to even ask just for formality if she ate or not or if she needs anything or even if she wants to share something, but no one is here to share her pain and Dilemma.

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