Friday 24 March 2017

Project- You are my Habit (Aadat hai tu Meri)- Part 10



Chapter 10



Love you all because of your comments I added 2 or 3 new scenes in the already written update as you wanted to see it... you detailed comments always left an impact on me to write more.




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Both came at home and Geet pulled him in the kitchen for cleaning and whatever mess he created with his innovative idea to pacify her. Maan shots a baby glares to her for making him work like a donkey that too after they had such a heavy dinner in the restaurant.




"Geet noo... please" Maan stepped back in fear, but Geet didn't give any heed to his fearful baby face and empty whole vegetable garbage basket on him in the revenge as he too did throw spinach leafs on her head.


Both finally managed to clean the kitchen but laughed to see each other status and decide to take bath one by one.



"I'll go first..." Geet announced.



"Nope... I'll" Maan countered back with his palms fixed either side of his waist.


"Why are you someone VIP. I'll go first." Geet whined.



Maan shriek and bend a little with a painful expression on his face in a second Geet was next to him and asked in impatiently voice "what happened? why did you scream?".


But being an opportunist, Maan ran away and go inside the washroom. Geet jaw dropped with the realization. He had made her fool. She gave him a look "will see you later." but he gave her most innocent smile and shut the door on her face whilst his laugh echoed in the apartment.


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Geet came out from the washroom with her hair wet and open. She gave angry look to Maan and scrunched her nose slightly to show him... she is still angry with him.



"Now, don't make faces my sweetheart! see I had prepared tea... come and have it then dry your hair" Maan spoke while placed two cups of hot tea at the bed table.




"No thanks, I didn't have any intention to die so soon especially such bitter death." Geet scowled and Maan laughed.




"Don't be scared Geet... I know how to prepare tea and that mess was just to pacify you," he confessed sheepishly which made Geet frowned and next moment she throw her wet towel on him in anger.




"You.. you. You are such a cunning devil Maan and I am sure you knew it." Geet glared him.



Maan just pulled her on the bed and shoved the hot tea cup in her palms to cool down her temper. He knew a cup of tea is enough to cool down his stubborn toddler wife.


A small smile touched Geet lips as he added "black pepper" in the tea for flavor and this is what she loved, but he hate it and still he added it in their tea.


Both finished and prepare for sleep when Maan again pulled her in his half-embrace and rested his back on bed post with his mobile in the fist. Geet looked at him questionably, but he blinked once and made a video call to Neelam.



"Mom... who is behaving like my mother in law and your mother nowadays," Maan whispered and Geet whacked his naked biceps.



Geet gave him a teasing smile "You are just an insecure bee Maan."



But before he answers back to his little not so innocent wife... his mother got visible on the screen as he made a video call.


Geet eye widens in amazement and she gave a look to Neelam than to Maan than back to Neelam. This is the first time when she is having a video call... so this reaction is acceptable.


Neelam laughed and Maan asked her to close her mouth or else fly will enter inside. She gave a quick glare to Maan and turn to greet Neelam.


"So finally... you got his lost brain, Maan .. I must say... you are nowhere near to your father when it comes to romance and pacifies your angry wife," Maan growled hearing his mother is making fun of his ability of romancing, but thanks his stars as she said the last link in English or else Geet was going to use it to tease him.


"Geet... What was the need to accept his apology so soon? You would let him do more hard work to pacify you." she smirked to see Maan's fuming expressions.




"Mumma, You don't know what had he done or else you wouldn't say it.Geet now sit straight in full mood to complain to her mother in law of all his doing.



"Mumma, she lost her mind...tell me how is your health, are you taking good care of yourself or I should give a surprise visit to you" Maan tried to divert the topic with his firm voice, but both women were not in his control to get scared by his fake firm voice at all.



So they just ignored his chatter-patter and continued their gossiping session which had the most annoying topic for Maan... "How messy is Geet's husband n Neelam's son is."



He growled due to this torcher to his innocent ears and Neelam was scolding him in the mid of their gossiping session whenever Geet completed his one of the misdeed stories.



"And Mumma, you should see what he had done to my kitchen or if I had forgiven him then nothing would be left in the kitchen. He had created such a huge mess Mumma," She finished her list of compliant with the latest one and gave a mocking smile to Maan who just give her "will see you later look."




"Maan, Why do you tease her too much? she is a lovely sweetheart and Geet why did you not make him clean the kitchen." Neelam spoke.. with a smile in voice.



"Wah wah... now I got...where did she get these dangerous ideas, Mom, my back is panning like hell and I am the one who did the cleaning or else your daughter-in-law just to boss over me" Maan fumed after a tiring day...Geet had commanded like a General and made him, clean the whole kitchen and here both are gossipping about him and his messy habits.



Both the ladies giggled and despite his irritation, his lips stretched into a beautiful smile.


"Maan ! Geet !Don't let come the third wheel in your relation every time you both have an argument and solve your problems with discussion and maturely and I don't want such serious issues again between you both hmm..." Neelam stern voice made both of them nodded in yes like obedient kids of her and she just rolled her eye.








After talking some more minutes... they ended call finally and Maan gave Geet a look you-are-gone and Geet gulped her saliva with those naughty look adore his face.




"Geet !!! Did you not complain too much to mom," he said and pulled her underneath him and tickled her till their Silent apartment echoed with both of their laughter.




Geet somehow slipped out from his iron grip and tickle him back and both laughed till the time Their eye sting with tears.




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Maan found a friend in Geet and start to spend his evening with her mostly. He came back to his apartment direct from college and spend his time with Geet, some time he teach her some words of English.. sometimes he teach her writing counting.. he even made memorized some phone number and teach her.. how to use landline at least as he attempt went in vain to teach her mobile.



Geet felt happy to found him around her and he even calls her from his college too like a good friend. She had a television in her apartment now to pass her afternoon but one day she asked Maan...some brushes and colors for clothes painting and Maan obliged like a good husband and fulfilled her wish.


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Her painted pillow covers, sheets nd other decorative items become a talk of building and some women even brought some pieces from her.


She excitedly told Maan about his first income for which Maan took her a famous temple of the city and Geet offered her first income to the god as showing gratitude. Again Maan asked her... not to spend her money and gifted her a little fairy shape bank for her collection.


Their bond is growing in a positive way so was the attraction for each other. Maan is still away from those feeling but Geet had been feeling a strong attraction for him.. she just not able to ignore hi physically as her mind had accepted completely all those vows which they took around the sacred fire at the time of their marriage.


For Maan...she is his friend and responsibility, but he never paid attention that she is his soulmate too. Perhaps his tight schedule could also blame for it...his most of the time went in studies and projects if he still gets little bit time than he gave it to KC projects. He just didn't pay attention to physical relation still.



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One fine day he was roaming in a mall with Nisha when he stopped suddenly. 




"Hey what happened? What are you looking for?" Nisha asked perplexed to see him stopped at ladies boutique and jealousy run through her veins to see what was exactly Maan is looking in the boutique.





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"Wait a minute Nisha," Maan said and enter inside the boutique...Nisha too followed him halfheartedly and before he says something...she popped in the mid from nowhere and grabbed the piece of his attraction in her grip.


"Aww so sweet! I just loved this saree... let me try and show you" Nisha spoke over-enthusiasms...leaving no room for Maan to deny her.


She knew all his weak points very well and one of among them is, he didn't create a fuss over materialistic goods and even leave his desire for his love ones too.


But Maan pulled it from her grip which made her rooted on the spot.


"Umm.. vo.. you could see anything... in the shop but this is for Geet," Maan felt she is still not convinced so he continued "Actually this is her favorite color...Mam can you show some in western for my friend" he said to sales girl who obliged with a smile.


But something had broken into Nisha's heart. Today Maan went over her for Geet and this is the first time when he had denied something to her... which wasn't digestible for her...tears of anguish sting her eyes and a feel of revenge sprouted in her heart. 




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Maan entered in their apartment whilst coughing.. he placed his laptop bag aside and fell on the bed as there is pain in his lungs and ribs from the morning, first, he gave a cold shoulder to it but now it's getting worst, his throat n head is aching n weakness made him breathing heavily.


Geet comes there with a glass of water and made him drink it.



"Geet...I am feeling really very cold... can you please take out a blanket for me," he said and laid on the bed.



Geet hurriedly went and back with the blanket and cover him securely than she removed his shoes and belt n open 3 or 4 buttons of his shirt. She felt panic to see his eyes is closing and coughing increasing.


She didn't understand what to do at this moment for a moment and decided to call Armaan first. He is an intern in the hospital and he could help her more than anyone else. She did same, what Maan had taught her and call Armaan.



"can you come to the apartment soon?"




"He is not well and I don't know any doctor..."Geet cried over the phone.



"Ok hold on...I am coming and don't be frightened." Armaan spoke the last line in brotherly concern for both of them... Geet and Maan.












Precap - One more meeting of Geet and Maan's friends.


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26 comments:

  1. I am loving maaneet increased bonding... but I believe something is still missing.. that have become good friends but not husband wife.. .
    as a friend he like to spend time with her but as a husband ????

    but I still like how their relationship is progressing.. good thing that maan taught her how to use phone..

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  2. maan realiwse ur feelings fr geet...........

    awesome update...

    loved it very much...

    thank u very much fr d lovely update...

    eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

    continue soon plz...

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  3. Nice update dear after coming from the dinner Geet pushed Mann in kitchen to clean and both fight and cleaned it Mann called his mom on video Geet complained about Mann to mom in mall Mann purchased saree to Geet recjecting Nisha Mann falls sick Geet call Arman for help

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  4. hi thanks 4 da beautiful update! well written! Maaneet nw comfortable with each other! they r friends! Maan makes a mess n then cleans up! Neelam n Geet r more like mom n daughter n Maan seems to be the son in law lol! Maan feels like a third wheel! Geet cribs 2 Neelam abt Maan! Geet falling 4 Maan! Maan thinks of her as a friend n responsibility! Geet is indeed talented! glad to see her dng something! Hope she gets an opportunity to study further! Maan n Geet's relationship progressing! Maan wants 2 get Geet an Indian outfit! Nisha miffed! she loves Maan bt he doesn't knw! Nisha will b a problem! Maan sees her as a friend! Maan unwell! Geet calls Armaan 4 help! it will take time 4 Maan 2 fall 4 Geet! update soon! khwaishfan IF

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  5. Omg amazing updates
    What to say about
    Ok I love maan here coz he so darling cute handsome the way he redo his mistake not to forget irritating geet for his doings

    Geet finally agreed forgive
    Both bond well
    She started to do small work in home
    It's amazing her skill her great strength
    Which you show it here
    Making her strong I don't know about other but it really a good and positive impact on those who thought their degrees was enough
    Besides maaneet with neelam talking lovely
    Her advised so true
    Geet accepted maan as husband and her feeling too
    Maan babu here too late
    Shopping with Nisha
    First time he say no to her
    Actually she should understand that her friend is married now for god sack stop being so jerk be in friend zone so their lives will be in peace

    Omg maan is ill geet call Arman
    Amazing updates
    Thanks for updating
    This
    Waiting for next
    Hira2010

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  6. Quite an improvement in maaneet' relation. Elders are required to show the correct path. Beautiful part.
    Nisha may become a trouble for Maaneet. Maan is still unknown to the ways of women and he may create some blunder.
    How come Armaan listened to Geet without showing attitude when he got offended with her step? Did he understand her fear?
    Overall a marvelous chapter. Since Maan is sick, Geet' care may sprout some feelings for her

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  7. PS- in some chapters I have given one or two words as comment that's because I felt them simple and likable. Also there is no analyzing or different aspects to discuss. Please don't get discouraged.

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  8. Good to see maan geet relationship improving hope this time maan and geet friend will good will love to see more lovely scene between maneet

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  9. it is very easy for Geet to feel physical attraction towards Maan because she already accepted him as her husband but very difficult for Maan because he don't even consider his marriage.....he will feel when he remember that he is married to Geet....she is not some friend who is living in his flat for just some days....it will take some time for him to start acknowledging her as his wife....

    Nisha wanted to snatch the saree which Maan wanted to buy for Geet.....but first time Maan possessively didn't let her grab that saree for herself....this is such a big blow to her ego....

    Maan is not feeling well and Geet called Armaan for help....

    awesome update....

    waiting for next part....

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  10. Superb update.
    loving the changed between maan n geet
    love maan geet and maan's mom covo
    so cute
    lovig their freindship
    nisha such jealous hate her
    hope maan will be okay

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  11. Nice update. If I'd is Cherukuri9

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  12. SUPERB UPDATE
    GEET MADE MAAN CLEAN THE KITCHEN AND THEY HAVE GALA TIME TOGETHER TEASING EACH OTHER
    AND THEY TALK WITH HIS MOM TROUGH VIDEO CALL WHERE HIS MOM AND GEET BITH PULL MAAN LEG
    MAAN BUY GEET FOR DRESS WHEN HE IS WITH NISHA SEING THS NISHA FELT J AND WANT THE SAME DRESS BUT MAAN SAYS THIS FOR GEET HE WANT FOR THIS ANGER HER AND MAAN FELL SEEK AND SEEING THIS GEET CALLED ARAMAAN AND HE ASSURE HER HE WILL THERE AND SAID HER DONT WORRY NOTHING WILL HAPPEN TO GEET

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  13. Nice story. I read this story all parts in one go.must say this is nice concept. I like way of your writing skills. Continue soon.

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  14. Nice story. I read this story all parts in one go.must say this is nice concept. I like way of your writing skills. Continue soon.

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  15. Beautiful and Lovely part..
    Geet na maan sa hi kitchen clean kia aur dono na ek dusra ko tease karka enjoy vi kar rahe hai.. Maan neelam mom ko video call karti hai aur geet apne complaint box open karti hai maan ka against lol and maan ki scolding and teasing vi acha sa hua mom sa.. Geet ab sab thoda thoda jan rahi hai maan ka help sa aur apne work sa income vi kia kuch money.. Maan na geet ka liya ek saree lia hai aur nisha jealous hai and maan ka behaviour sa ab revenge mood ma hai geet sa.. Maan ki health bigad gaya hai and geet apne idea sa armaan ko call karta hai help ka liya..
    Precap intresting..
    Waiting for next part..

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  16. Part 10 – so geet made maan do all work and clean the kitchen. Poor maan had to listen to his wife. But good thing is that he accepted her as a friend and started to spend more time with her. geet was very happy that he devoting time for her from his busy schedule.

    The video talk of mg with neelima was fun-full. Both ladies took a good chance to complain & scold him. Poor maan. But he was also happy to see both happy & smiling.

    Maan purchased sari for geet. Why this nisha had to poke her nose in his all business. Glad that maan snatched that sari from her and told her that’s for geet. But nisha was jealous and hope she will not do anything wrong to geet.

    Oh….maan was ill and geet called armaan. Hope that he too will learn how soft and lovely she is.

    IF - Madhuri53

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  17. Beautiful update
    Loved the bossy geet jis tarah se wo maan se kitchen saaf karwati hai maan made tea for geet wo bhi paper Wali Jo usse pasand nahi
    Maan make a video call aur wo Neelam and geet ki baat kawata hai
    Pehle tou geet is shocked but baad mai uska complain box khulta hai Jo band hone ka naam hi nahi leta
    Dono ladies mil kar maan ki khub tang khichai karti hai
    Now their reaction is in progress
    Geet is attracted towards him
    Maan geet ko English ke words and phone kis tarah karna hai ye sikhata hai
    Maan geet ke liye ek saari pasand karta hai but nisha kehti hai ki wo usse trial karke dikhati hai but maan kehta hai ki this is for geet tum khuch aur le lo jiski wajah se nisha is feeling jealous for geet aur wo geet se iska revenge lene ke baare mai sochti hai
    Maan is not feeling well isliye geet armaan ko call karke bulati hai
    Precap sounds interesting
    Beautifully written
    Loved it

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  18. Yippeeee:):):) They made up:):):) So happy to see their relationship grow so beautifully...How Maan found comfort and a soulmate in Geet. Though he has not given his feelings for Geet a name other than friendship and care etc...but his love is becoming apparent. So sweet of him to get a saree in Geet's favourite colour for her...And that chipkali got so jealous:):):) And now she is thinking of revenge. Worried about Geet and Maan...I hope at least now Maan realizes the chipkali's true colours. And goes away from her coz she has bad intentions. Poor Maan is unwell and Geet is super worried that she called Armaan. She does not know anyone else than Maan that well to ask for help so she called Armaan as Maan had taught her. I hope Geet calls Neelam & hope she comes down to be with them. The teaser for Chp 11 was superb...That horrid chipkali got told off...I hope the rest of Maan's friends respect and treat Geet like their own sister and help the couple out. I am hoping that the chipkali will be removed completely:):):) So sorry dear...she is too much na:):):) Can't wait to read your next update:):):)

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  19. I love this geer amazing so nice

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  20. wonderful update...loved it...wow maaneet became friends...both were enjoying to clean the kitchen.. lovely maaneet moments...geet surprised to see neelam infront of them on video call...geet was naughty to start complaining...one day he went mall with nisha & he saw saree of geet's fav colour but nisha asked for it & he refused her which made her insulted as 1st time maan refused her for his wife... omg maan was not well so geet called armaan to see maan...excited for next IF-uluvmg...!!

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  21. They patched up��.superb upfate! Geet made maan clean the kitchen ��. Now their relationship has come on track. Two innocent souls have found their companion n friend in each other. Thou maan is still thinking feet as friend n responsibility n soon i hope he will feel it as like as geet. Maan has started to give geet priority over his friends. I hope nisha's evil intention won't do any harm to their new born relationship. I hope maan will b ok .
    Update soon dear. Waitinggghghhh.......

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  22. Mindblowingggg update....
    Maaneet bonding got little stronger....
    Geet falling in love with Maan...
    Loved d way Maan snatched that saree from Nisha....
    Now Maan his not well...
    And called Armaan....
    Finally Armaan to realized about geet insecurities....
    Looking forward for Armaan and Geet bro /sis bonding sooo muchhh...

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  23. AWESOME update
    For me The Best thing about they way Maan supported Geet and encouraging her talent guiding her in his own way thats really a suprising he didnt shows that im the men and i had enough money their is no need to do this and that blah blah he actually supported her thats shows he gem as a person their is lot of ppls who try to overshadows ur talent try to harm ur individuality in the name of society and all but no he is not like that no one does that he surely was prooving himself to be a different kind of husband ... they had so much difference issues and problems , way to diffrent upbringing n prospective yet they are their for each other i must say Maan was the show stopper of this update ... here Maaneet are perfect exam .. every relationship are not perfect yet they are perfect in their own unique way :) ....
    love maaneet's cute little moments .. geet feel for him coz she accepted their relation by heart .. and
    maan unconsciously accepted their relationships but don't realise it ... its shows when that good for nothing nisha trying smart wid him he he outrightly rejected her aawww someone is getting possessive aahhaha he behave like possessive hubby jisne wifey k likye pyaar se srari kharidi us idiot nisha ko choone tak nahi diya bang on how innocently he her place !! ...

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  24. maan gert relations getting better maan liked hr ad his friend and spend time with hr too
    wow maan purchase gift fr his wifey and nisha get jealous and thought to take revenge from geet

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  25. Beautiful and Amazing update!!!Maaneet became good friends now....Geet made him to clean the kitchen... both are enjoying and teasing each other...Maan found friend in Geet...he spends his time with Geet and he teach her some words of English... Geet felt happy found him around her..Maaneet bond is growing in positive way...Geet feels a strong attraction for him but he is still away from those feelings....Loved Maaneet and his mom video call..its really lovely and beautiful....Maan went to Mall with Nisha...Maan bought saree for Geet...Nisha wants taht saree but Maan refused her...Hate that Nisha...she is really witch and stupid too....Maan fall in sick....Geet felt panic and she call Armaan....Loved it so much....waiting for the next update...

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  26. Nice update dear
    Liked it!!
    As promised maan tried to fulfill his words and was sharing his time with her. Maaneet were progressing in their relationship as friends and shared a lovely camaraderie with each other but the thoughts of being them married is still hidden under curtains and needs time to realise their feelings for each other.On other hand Nisha was envying Geet seeing maan's caring demeanor towards her and yet to realise that maan is forbidden fruit as he is married.maan fell sick and geet was in panic.

    IF name: anu5

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